| Reviews for One Punch man: But different |
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   Brico4889 chapter 12 . 7/28 I hope you can update soon. And more saitama/tatsumaki moments |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/21 I like this story..pls continue |
| RedianRed chapter 11 . 7/16 is it just me or do i see only 78 comments, even when i comment i can't see it more then 78 |
| TheDemon1911 chapter 12 . 7/5 Quick question, is his fight againt boros going to be like canon or is it going to be visoble for a few or everyone? |
| RedianRed chapter 11 . 6/23 I delete part 12, and will start chapter 11 on 24 juni 2020. In other words tomorrow. I promise i'll make the chapter 4k words and more details. (it won't be perfect thought) After chapter 11 i'll edit all chapters.(Again) I just noticed i'm improving my grammer faster here in fanfic then on school lol... |
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/21 I personally like canon |
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/20 Longer chapters would be cool keep it canon for now if you want and adding details in fights or more dialog whatever you want but it's looking cool |
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/20 I recommend more details and that the filler is only used when necessary, always contributing to the story |
| Mortem666 chapter 12 . 6/20 I'd say they could be a bit longer with a little more detail especially with Saitama and Tatsumaki romance but you're the writer of this story so the decision is up to you still this story is running great keep it up |
| brandonjensen0703 chapter 12 . 6/22 uh I dont really want aot fanfic but I like where this is going, personally if you do what we want you will lose interest and we will lose contect so in real terms we all want you to keep doing it, if that means making shorter chapters or non/can on parts go 4 it. If you dont mind thought more effort is always better, longer more detailed, but that's a lot of work so I'd say the most important part is making the caraters actally seem like themselves, dont make saitama try to be friends with everyone or something, keep them how they really are. good luck man, I like it, gove it a 8.5/10 rn |
| RedianRed chapter 12 . 6/21 thanks for all your advis. i keep that in mind |
| GhostColts141 chapter 12 . 6/21 Maybe some heroic moments with Saitama, just so people and heros can see his power |
| Exodus12345 chapter 12 . 6/21 Some non canon please. Plus maybe some romance. So far it is pretty much the same as canon and is boring. |
| thehappy chapter 12 . 6/20 Details help set the mood and area, so that would help. Also some spellchecking. Perhaps finding a Beta to help? Moving away from canon makes this instantly more fun to read. If i want canon, I'll just watch the show. But keep on working at it |
| WeslenBR chapter 11 . 6/20 nice |
