Really good

I am loving how you are throwing for honor and dark souls here. BLACK PRIOR!

Hold up is the mc a offsprin of fluffy tail? wasn't ablion one of his ancestores names?

Dark souls?

I will know hear the mc's voice as the warden... Sweet

Tu Muriturus or however u spell it... sounds familiar... For honor peace keeper?

And we start off with a good note due to the MC screaming the lines from For Honor...

not too bad I really like this one hope for more to be written soon.

Love your story so much.
Love they way you'r writing the story so far.
Please keep it up, there arent many stories of kuroinu that are as good as your's and are updated, many are abandoned.
Looking forward for the next chapter.

I love this story already, very well written! :)

It's very addictive to read and it's been fun reading so far!

I look forward to chapter 7! :3

This is a very well written story that is chock full of indiscrete fanservice that made me squeal like a little girl and called upon my inner child that was screaming "HELL YEAH BOI" while I was reading this.

The references to Dark Souls, Goblin Slayer, Assassin's Creed and some other titles I probably forgotten serve not as an icing on the cake, but as a delicious crust of it. All the references wouldn't have worked if the writing wasn't compelling and very well thought out, which it is in this case.

I did read the Irregular, and I have to say that while some things between it and this fic are very similar, this one fleshes out every aspect of it and gives some meaning behind it. It also looks better here than in Irregular.

Now, for me not to sound like a complete kiss ass, I'm gonna say immediately that this fic isn't perfect. There are some grammatical errors here and there as well as an oddly structured sentence in every second chapter. And I do have to note my concern over Alistair getting these powers on the fly this quickly - if you'd introduce him being able to cast the Sunlight Spear after a few dozen chapters, sure I'd take it. But this fast?

Yeah, my PTSD from the Star Wars sequels is slowly crawling back into my mind.

You might already know, but the journey of the protagonist, the Hero, must have some obstacles that he/she must overcome. It's up to you to write how they overcome it, and the end result is that the character develops and becomes more mature. It is the reason why a lot of people don't like anime characters like Kirito from SAO, because that fucker embodies the trope of a lucky shit that has a head start and starts acting like he's above the plebs.

Seriously, why some people think SAO is a good anime is beyond me.

True, Alistair has the luck of being born into a line of strong warriors, but that shouldn't mean he'll gets all the cool shit right at the beginning. Even when I play Dark Souls, I have to work my ass hard and long to level up enough to be able to wield a good weapon or use a powerful spell.

While I do believe that the whole memory lane thing is a bit neat on how he can communicate with his ancestors, that shouldn't mean he'd be able to wield with some skill. Which baffles my mind since you executed this well when Alistair almost got himself killed by using Lifehunt, but before you screw it up by him managing to cast what is the one of the more powerful spells, the Sunlight Spear, a few more times before he couldn't do it. Sunlight Spear itself is a spell that requires a LOT of investment into Faith, and for him to be able to cast such a spell? Lightning Spear (20 Faith) could work, Great Lightning Spear (30 Faith) is already stretching it really tight, but Sunlight Spear(40 Faith)? Really?

Shiet man, even the Great Heal (25 Faith) is also a bit much. It would be understandable if he could potentially cast something like Heal (12 Faith) or even Med Heal (15 Faith).

There is a thin line between making a character an absolute badass and making a character boring as heck, and you're already tilting it towards the latter. You didn't fall there completely, there's still time to regain the balance.

The story and it's main character are fun, the fanservice is eyecatching enough to keep someone like me pinned on the screen to reread the whole thing multiple times. Just be careful on how you develop your character - it's not easy, I know, but when you decide to do something, then you gotta do it right.

I like this story.

WHAT ARE YA DOING IN MA SWAMP!?

I am getting Doom Slayer vibes bruh.

great story keep it up