Please do continue this

one word: grammarly

I hope you put some effort into learning proper English soon, because the story is was great. It's just that the execution was terrible. I do want to read it once it's all done though, for sure.

Why are you so bad at this? Where the heck did you learn English from? It's bloody well horrible. You might want to get a beta if you ever write another story, or make a new chapter

ah.. T_T
The feels when the story you like reach an end.

Thank you for sharing us this story, Author-san.

Tower of Naruto quiero mas de esta historia me encanta quiero el capitulo 4 de esta historia es obvio que vfa ser un harem con esas dos chicas pero ma pregunto quien mas va unirse a su harem la lagarto o alguna otra princeas zahard la princesas gemelas que aparecen luego deberian unirse a su harem te seguire apoyando sube los capitulos siguientes de esta historia

Hey your'e back, Super! Looking forward to this wherever it goes, Thanks for Writing!

the ultimate story for sakura fans. hakuno x sakura harem OP

This is a great start and I can't wait to see where it goes.

Funny keep it up!

This is a really good first chapter.

i was wondering what will peroroncino do when he meet meltlilith and passionlip for the first time...

A few errors here and there, but otherwise the story so far is good

wats hakuno's build and stats?

I am honestly just interested in how you will play with the three of the Sakura Five since BB's my favorite girl in CCC alongside with Lip and Melt. Hope you make them more relevant than just 'Hakuno's Guardians'.

That said, you also kinda need to get a spell-checker and re-read your work to fix a lot of punctuation problems. Your sentences are too short and ends arubtly, kinda interrupting the pace of the story. Hakuno also reacted kinda 'meh' for being alive again.

Other than that, you got one of the rarest and interesting premises out there with Hakuno being in Overlord and a decent start so... go wild!