Please make more this storyline is really good

I hate this is only 3 chapters so good you capture it all so good

You know how to hook a story. I’m really interested in seeing how this turns out. It’s weird thinking of Naruto being a pervert off this magnitude but it would as a coping mechanism for the story. I hope you continue.

I shouldn’t be readings this... lol I got so much second hand embarrassment from Naruto _ I just wanna shake him and tell him to get his shit together. And honestly I wanna see how you finish this because if some guy was gonna video tape me just to show off to his friends I would forget about him and move on just like Hinata is doing

Waah, he’s trying the old man’s perverted path! Can Hinata help? ... in what way lol.

Very well written, might I add. Here’s some sympathy and luck thrown at Naruto! :D

I enjoyed it! Please continue

I always loved the life of a swan. They mate for life. It's so romantic.
Although, in the latter part of the story, I can't help feeling sad too. I hope things change for the better for him.

Hinata a whore and naruto is dickless. Naruto seems like the stalker now. Even when hinata and sasuke are getting it on in the bedroom naruto is still a good puppy waiting for his master. God I love it that naruto will suffer more. Keep writing.

Yeah you’re right, that was pretty depressing. Gotta taste the bitter to truly appreciate the sweet though, right? At least I hope that’s what you’re doing..! Tbh I’m not really sure what’s going on anymore, but I trust that you, do..? Also I really appreciate frequency of your updates :)

Interesting that Naruto barely scraped through school but reckons he can write a novel..? Then again, determination and all that I guess. Academic writing is pretty different to creative writing too...

It really makes me sad that he doesn’t have his friends anymore, but it happens, especially when you don’t have the convenience/excuse of school to hang out with those people anymore. I really hope it turns out that the guys did try to snap him out of his funk and pull him back in line, making several attempts in fact to get through to him, but he was too busy wallowing in heartbreak and self-loathing to notice, so “just give him some space, guys” turned into him assuming they hated him or some such..? But, assuming they hate him now, Naruto never reaches out himself, just bitterly acknowledges he’s even more alone, and thinks even less people care about him...

Of course they could never have a frank and open conversation because they’re boys, but I hope that situation gets remedied before too long. Maybe something bizarre like once Naruto has his life somewhat together and is almost happy with his life he runs into Sasuke (and some of the guys? Maybe drunk? Maybe at a convenience store?) and then he doesn’t say hello because he thinks they hate him and he’s invisible until he announces his presence and then just as he’s leaving & silently congratulating himself for not begging for their attention and ruining their night, Sasuke comes up and gives Naruto an earful about, “what, you think you’re too good for us now?” and descends into a lament about how nobody’s heard from him in ages and you could at least have the decency to let one of us know you’re not dead once a month even if you don’t want anything to do with us and a bit of insight into how Naruto latched onto the wrong end of the stick and you can’t just throw your friends away like they’re garbage and of course peppering some insults in there too, just enough to get Naruto to start also shouting even though he’s not sure what’s going on, and then finally when it looks like they’re about to have drunken fisticuffs they embrace each other and Sasuke is fully crying and saying, “you’re my best friend, you idiot!” and Naruto is crying too even though he’s straight edge because of his godfather and the other boys who are there are crying because they finally got their doofus of a friend back and it’s that happy kind of cringeful/awkward that is kind of funny and really sweet...

...yeah, something like that, maybe? I’m also interested to see how Hinata’s coping. Maybe Ino had a talk with her that ended with the sage advice, “fake it til you make it,” and she wasn’t sure she’d ever make it to happiness before Neji came back into her life, and also Tenten was there...

Yeah I’m just super curious to see where you take the story now! :)

Hmm, this is the first story I read that he plans to continue Jiraya's work. Interesting.
I miss 21 Days ! But I will patiently wait :)

The solution? Fucking relax, have a cream soda, everything is going to be okay.

Wow I need MORE please!

I read both your stories in the space of 4h. ITS SOME GOOD ANGSTY SHIT PLEASE DONT STOP WRITING EVER ️

Wow, I feel the heartbreak and trust me it hurts. You did a great job with this chapter! Ah, why must love be complicated? Anyways can’t wait for the next update :)