Am so sorry to hear you lost your pets, though am happy you were able to save one of them! Get back on your feet first before worrying about this story, we'll wait tyfs.

please update soon

I really like where you are going with this. I can't wait to read more. So up date soon!

Awesome

c'est génial et bien écrit, continue comme ça

I prefer longer chapters

a really good beginning, eager to read more. I'm very sorry for your lost and hopefully you are doing better now.

nice chapter

The Harry-Voldy verbal spar might benefit from future polish edit.
Maybe also rearrange that dialog so most of the taunt talking not during spell firing (other than SHORT insults), making more realistic. Eg. such asduring priori incantantum, and while Harry ducking behind tombstones (option there to have Harry ducking behind tombstones more than once or twice, for your insult trading dialog).

Good to not carbon copy repeat canon so much as many do (no round trip portkey out, inferi Ced).

Can't help imagining an option to where none or too rare for me to recall any fanfic taking that option, by making canon "showing loyalty to great old me", a lie or delusion by Dumbledore (regarding how & why Fawks flames into CoS). In that vein, I note that you could use "singing" Fawk feathers during the priori incantantum, being a "beacon/signal" Fawks could sense, and hence come flaming there maybe even just do to curiosity(of the priori effect, wand cores "singing" ... lol or screamy growning under stress) than Fawks being on a rescue mission (until he got there).

Great start to a good story

nice chapter