Reviews for She's out of my control
daianapotter chapter 10 . 9/26
Me encanta como las hermanas ya quieren que sea parte de la familia n.n

Y si, sacrificarse por alguien más es justo lo que haría orihime.

Puede que tanta energía hollow haya hecho despertar en ella eso
Merry Beaker Fractale chapter 11 . 9/10
I love your story! I love how Ichigo didn’t want to like Orihime and now he’s so in love with herI’m so excited to see what happens later with Hime and her hollow powers and with IchiHime also with Byakuya and Uryuu. I hope you update soon
tipipkd chapter 11 . 8/21
wow 3 chapters in a week...i like your story. and i'm following your other stories too such as 'college life' or 'after i met you". they all are good. i hope you will make progress on them too. i'm eager to find out what happen next.
Orihime-18 chapter 11 . 8/16
Finally ichi confess his feeling yehey *smile*

because he couldn't see his future without her..(this is the most sweet realization of his feeling)..he’s deeply in love now..yehey again..and now he will break his promise ro tsubaki..I’m afraid of that promise coz at the beginning of the chap he still feel guilty of what happen to hime..I’m glad at the end something happen to them it will strengthen their love and feelings and ichi will not leave her no matter what..I’m happy if I’m gonna hear a wedding bell at the end haha
For the hollow king I think he’s good he could be helping them to take down grand fisher..a hollow could be good too especially if he’s the hollow inside hime (if the host is good then maybe they have goodness as well just like ichi’s hollow)
Eleanor chapter 1 . 8/16
Please have someone check your grammar and punctuation.
Mdelcsw70 chapter 11 . 8/16
Three updates just a few days apart, you are awesome! It was a surprising twist that Orihime has now gotten a hollow power. Very interesting, and glad you are making her stronger with it. Can’t wait to read more ! And more Ichihime moments, yeah !
daianapotter chapter 9 . 8/15
Menudo idiota por haber ido a buscar otras mujeres. Por suerte no hizo nada, me alegra que byakuya le haya puesto un freno.

Me encanto la aparición de isshin y la conversación de entre las hermanas y orihime n.n
Isabelle Corales chapter 10 . 8/15
Yikes thank you for the new updates
Orihime-18 chapter 10 . 8/15
Is she gonna have a hollow more strength more power :)...anything that makes ichi and hime being closer will be fine with me even to hav her acquaring hollow abilities but not her to be a hollow of course haha just like ichi..I was relieved ichi wont keep his promise tsubaki to stay away from her...tsubaki was really cool though and he’s cute but wondering y ichi can see them by not the shinigami even unohana :) ..tnx for the update :)
Mdelcsw70 chapter 9 . 8/13
Thank you for coming back and updating the story! You made my day. I love how the story keeps progressing... Orihime is so charming, and Ichigo is softening (big time) under her influence. You captured the hilariousness of his family situations really well. Keep your spirits high, and stay healthy and safe. Looking forward to more chapters of this story.
Orihime-18 chapter 9 . 8/12
Wow finally an update for this story thank you so much for continuing this great fic..hope ur doing fine their and be safe as well..reading ichihime or story with ichi and hime made me smile and my day was fine already..spending time reading keeps myself busy then and out of boredom...this story is one that keeps me smile so I’m happy it was been updated..*smile*
Ichi and hime kissing I squel there lol and when he denied that she wasn’t there though it was in his arms aga haha but too bad he went to other women company but at the end at least he didn’t do more to them..hoping ichi here will change to be one man woman and be faithful though he’s not sure if he’s feelings yet..as of what he says it seems he didn’t fall yet to those women he’s been to though he introduced them to his fam and for this hime will be the first eventually he will realized he’s in love already for the first time hahaha..of course I’m an ichihime *grins*..about his fam typically a kurosaki with isshin’s antics and coolness lol..the twins opposite character..it’s nice that they all in favor on her especially Karen to accept and like her upon seeing her which never happens before..and of course the kissing was adorable and enterrwining their hands...a great story they are all in ss (shinigami)
Guest chapter 8 . 5/30
hola es muy buena tu historia. Espero que actualices pronto . me encanta ichigo y orihime...
Orihime-18 chapter 8 . 4/22
Continue
daianapotter chapter 8 . 3/23
Adoro el ichigo celoso n.n y por fin se puso los pantalones y la beso tranqui, actualiza cuando puedas. Lo importante es que estés a salvo
Mdelcsw70 chapter 8 . 3/23
Don’t worry about posting, just be safe and stay healthy. Everything else can wait.
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