woow I like the idea! thsnks!

whaaaat just happend? this was hard to understand... So El has abilities? Did mike teleport to El's world or the other way around, this is so confusing...

WOW! What an amazing story! I hope you keep going with it, but even if it ends here it’s absolutely fantastic! Thank you for writing it, especially with such a creative twist!

For as rough around the edges that their friendship is in the show, I really love how you have built out Mike and Max in this.

Great setup. I like that the premise for his series is ST itself. Curious about Mike's visceral reaction as he came up with her name.

I am loving this story, please continue

Whoa. No idea how that happened, but here for it all the same! Dang this story is good, thanks for writing it!

Ok what... so max opend a dimensional portal to Mike's mind...?

Wow! Fascinating take on things, this is really something else! Great idea, I’m hooked and excited to see where it goes!

interesting aproach I have to say, but I am very wxcited for the next chapter, pls keep it up! But what about them being sick...?