This is truly interesting to read; please update very soon

I pitied Rolo; I hope both him and Urabe are in this. I'm also hoping that Lelouch will have almost all magic. I don't like Time Arc: Last Ages. Will Lelouch have a code of immortality in this fanfic or be just hard to kill?

Please stay safe and healthy

I don't typically agree with the inclusion of the biblical God as a method for reincarnation. This is made worse by your depiction since it's powerful enough to do all these things for Lelouch, but not powerful enough to avoid these issue in the first place is bad form.

It's also unnecessary if you feel the need to invent a reason for the crossover for Code Geass. The Akito the Exiled movies present the Dimensional Supervisor (or Caretaker of Spacetime depending on translation source) that could handle sending the character to another world without needing to stretch things too far.

But to cut a long explanation short, issue with the inclusion of a ROB (Random Omnipotent Being) is that a ROB inherently undermines the seriousness of a story. If you want to write a comedy, then that's often very desirable. If you want to tell a serious story though, it's like tripping at the starting line. You seem to want to tell a serious story, but you keep bringing up your ROB and undermine that seriousness.

Also, writing wise, author notes in the middle of a chapter are very poor form for a story you want taken seriously. Use a footnote if you feel like you must include one.

I wish you luck as an author, but I'm nowhere near invested enough to spend the time continuing to read this let alone review it. Everyone needs to start somewhere and this is your start for writing.

Alright, I'm gonna be giving some harsh, but hopefully constructive criticism that can help you can grow as a writer.

It felt a bit excessive to read the whole Zero Requiem again. It's a very impactful scene and I'm pretty sure you depicted it faithfully, but entirely unnecessary.

If someone is familiar with Code Geass they don't need you to rewrite the whole scene because it was impactful enough they should remember it. If someone isn't familiar with Code Geass, most of the scene is pointless filler that doesn't give them anything.

You should try to keep your writing to what's necessary for the scene. The point of using the Zero Requiem as the place to take Lelouch for a crossover is to take him from the end of his story, a point where he would have absolutely no desire or need to return. The perfect place to give him a fresh start, although it comes with significant emotional baggage for Lelouch.

As for the actual delivery of the scene, you suffer primarily from the fact that exactingly recreating the Zero Requiem as shown in the show does not translate to words very well. There's not really a better way to put it than that and without making a major effort to restructure the presentation of the Zero Requiem it can't easily be fixed.

You also have minor stylistic "issues" that are very common in fanfiction. For one, it's poor form to explicitly call out the start and end off a flashback. If your writing alone can't convey that it's a flashback via context clues and subtle cues, you could include some indication of the time at the start to show that it's a different time for that scene (although this typically requires indicating the time for all scenes). If you can't convey to the reader that it's a flashback even with that trick, you should consider not including it.

Another stylistic issue is using a number in its numeral form rather than writing it out. There's a lot of room to bend this rule, but generally you should write out whole numbers less than ten. For example, "Two of these vehicles" instead of "2 of these vehicles"

well if your making this harem limit 4 i predict the next two will be Juvia and Kagura

I already love this story, and it would seem that Lelouch will have a harem. I wonder who else will join.

Keep up the good work.

That was an awesome chapter bro but if lelouch is going to fufill his mission i want lelouch to have some lost magics as his trump cards here's lelouch's lost magic: sea dragon slayer magic, purgatory dragon slayer magic, cavern dragon slayer magic, gale dragon slayer magic, heavenly dragon slayer magic, abyss dragon slayer magic, storm dragon slayer magic, cosmic dragon slayer magic, lightning god slayer magic, shadow god slayer magic, fire god slayer magic, white god slayer magic, abyss devil slayer magic, shadow devil slayer magic, war god slayer magic, water devil slayer magic, lightning devil slayer magic, storm devil slayer magic and finally ice devil slayer magic man and let him have dragon king modes on his dragon slayer magic along with dual elements man that's what i want lelouch to have and let rolo be on this story he has time magic, bomb magic, and 2nd generation destruction dragon slayer magic also put shirley in this world as well she has fire-make magic, shadow-make magic, heavenly body magic and water god slayer magic too i ship lelouch x euphie x erza x shirley x ? you can figure out about that anyways see ya

When I first started reading this story I thought that having Lelouch mesh with the characters of Fairy Tail would make an interesting read. Making Lelouch a fighter is something that wasn't really seen in Code Geass since they used mechas there. To be honest though; I am losing interest in this story. The main issue in my opinion is the way Lelouch is being portrayed. He is being way too forthcoming about his past to people who are strangers to him. There has been no reason for this sudden change of personality. Remember that Lelouch was betrayed by people he trusted like the Black Knights, Kallen, Ohgi, CC, and even Nunnally. After those betrayals there is no way he would tell the story of his whole life leaving nothing out. It makes it seem unrealistic. And no, spending 7 years with Mavis won't change that so easily. The other issue is the lack of planning or thought put into fighting. Lelouch wanting to add Lucy to the team was stupid. We all know that Lucy is pretty much cannon fodder right now. Lelouch should have pointed out her weakness and suggested she not be included on the team. It would have been better to have her train with Euphemia or Lelouch to get stronger to join for the next mission. The point of adding Lelouch to Fairy Tail should have been to add control to the chaos and destruction that the fighters inflict not to add to it. I mean it was said in the chapter, only Schneizel was smarter than Lelouch. Nobody in the Fairy Tail universe can match his brains except maybe Mavis.

great

why don’t your god send your Michael and Azazel for damned cups? Well, or revive the damned Mavis so she collected that bloody dish? Yes, even a deal with Zeref sounds much more logical and more pleasant for the eyes than the damned resurrection of the damned Lelouch, who is actually not Lelouch

What is the point of taking Lelouch and making him an absolute, total OOC ? Here, in three chapters, I did not see anything worthwhile for fans / lovers of the geass code.
You hurt me with your story.
Do you hear that? This is the sound of broken hopes and expectations. I repeat, your main character is an OC with appearance and knowledge of the canon of the geass code.

Hmm...
So far you're following FAIRY TALE cannon with Lelouch & Euphimia tagging along.
But there should be more to your story than just that, I bet. YHWH wouldn't have picked Lelouch as his champion just because the teen can be trusted to do his best. God must have a need for a champion that it smart and good at both manipulation/spy-type stuff & war management.
Hope to see where you go with this.

Well, at least with Markov in on the mission, the old man can keep his ears open for news of anything that could be God's artifacts.

Fuck Euphemia and her ugly annoying optimistic ass

Well here it goes . I am sorry to say but this is not for me. But still good luck to u

well I don't know why to put his name Lelouch lamperouge not lelouch I saw britannia, more than good.

then god who helps Lelouch to get power back and still fight enemy.

I liked Lelouch's master.

so Lelouch can negate 4 elements and still use power against them yet.

like Lelouch is very strong at first I want to see who's going to be his enemy.

I liked Euphie back to life.

I will follow history.

Are you going to bring Shirley into the story?