So far so good hope more comes soon though I do hate the fact that there are people that go an kill an author's interest on continuing their stories and to those people I say you all can go and shove your head in toilets where they belong (note I'm being nice about what I'm saying to you ingrates)

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This has a lot of potential and I can’t wait to see what happens next.

Salem is still a threat to Naruko and her loved ones, and if anything there's a chance she's responsible for Kushina dying which makes her an even bigger target.

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This is really good! I hope you keep up the great work!

where's the rest?

This is very interesting I would really like to read more on it please keep up the good work.

One, Ruby isn't her cousin.

Two, Naruko is rather free with info. Seems strange for a damn bandit.

Three, the whole Naruko vs Pyrrha in the tournaments is so cliche that i actually rolled my eyes at it. Worse was that you where even a pussy about it and had them literally tied with one win each and two draws.

Four, the whole open relationship thing is fine but i really hope it ain't gonna get excessive. Though, you really should consider just keeping it a single pairing or just one more at most, though single pairing is better.

Five, Raven thinks its pointless to oppose Salem yet apparently want to draw her attention to the tribe by interfering with the Fall Maiden plans? Seems counter productive if you ask me. I honestly hope Salem turns up herself and destroys the tribe (even if it is to show that actions have consequences).

Six, if she actually has two semblances than i call BS but i suspect that instead of Raven being the Maiden it is possible it is Naruko instead, which would honestly be more interesting than some BS reason/excuse for her having two semblances. The closest i can think of to two semblances would be Mercury's dad, Marcus semblance was to steal another's semblance so it couldn't be used.

Seven, disappointed that you stopped the antagonistic relationship of Naruko/Yang. I was actually looking forward to the animosity between them but nope, you have to make everyone get along and sing songs with rainbows and glitter sparkling in the sky while Unicorns prance around.

Naruko can copy other people’s’ Semblances, can’t she!?

Oh snap, now all you have to do is have Qrow find out his relation with Naruko! Expect to see Yang and Ruby ATTACK Qrow for being a deadbeat father at the very least!

Awesome 2 chapters continue please.

Things get more interesting by the minute, and I love it! *huge grins*

Please continue when you may, Storm.

Good luck naruko and her allies