Reviews for Beaten and Broken |
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RavenclawDeanna chapter 16 . 4/19 Awwww! Here's a double review for the double chapters I found waiting for me this morning (which was exciting so thank you!) Theo's story of his Dad broke my heart. I have worked with children from homes like that and it just breaks my heart. I love Hermione. The way she goes off on tangents is so similar to myself. That mind be always working. Draco is awake! And in such a brilliant moment too! I love it! Can't wait for moooreeee! Also yes! Go Ravenclaw! |
buddybuddy96 chapter 15 . 4/18 tansy being upset at not being able to make a sausage pizza is the best thing I could possibly imagine I love it |
priestessofeternity chapter 15 . 4/18 Wow what a mystery! Great story so far! |
SLYNNR chapter 15 . 4/18 NO PROBLEM I JUST GET TO READ MORE OF YOUR GREAT STORY. ANYWAY LOVING TE CHAPTER. TANSY IS SUCH A SWEET CHARACTER I WAS WONDERING IF YOU ARE GOING TO HAVE ANYONE ASK HER ABOUT DOBBY? MAYBE SHE IS DOBBY'S SISTER? |
LillsBills chapter 15 . 4/17 Poor Theo! I hope her gets a happy ending too! (Theo is one of my favorite characters in fanfiction and I love the way you write him here!) I can’t wait for the next one! |
Tama Benson chapter 12 . 4/12 hi , im really your story its very smooth and particulary i enjoy your healing and medical descriptions. well done ill be following this with a passion. the only criticism i have and its crucial (!) don't take this the wring way please - i advise you refrain from using "Mia" in this fic or any other fic. it is well known in our dramione community that the nickname is a huge turnoff and it's been debated countless times. Just drop it.. other than that i have no more inputs other than continue and stay safe during this crazy period in our history |
buddybuddy96 chapter 14 . 4/10 im in love with this owl I can't even |
Ditte3 chapter 14 . 4/10 Great chapter |
RavenclawDeanna chapter 14 . 4/10 Woooo! I got a shout out! I think this chapter fitted really well. I like the friendship growing between Theo and Hermione, it's cute and refreshing. I'm starting a Tansy fan club. I love that little elf! Stay safe and keep well! Until next time! |
RavenclawDeanna chapter 13 . 4/10 My heart is already breaking for Theo in anticipation of him seeing Draco. Those poor boys. I love Tansy, I would love some of her cooking haha. Anyway, must read on. Speak soon! |
SLYNNR chapter 14 . 4/10 ARE YOU GOING TO HAVE A TIME JUMP IN THE NEXT CHAPTER? |
LillsBills chapter 14 . 4/10 We have been BLESSED with two chapters! Thank you! I love Theo and I hope that he can be some help... I still thing the perp is Ron and other Aurors |
buddybuddy96 chapter 12 . 4/7 ah love it! drunk harry hermoine life chats are always fun ones :) |
RavenclawDeanna chapter 12 . 4/7 I really love this fic, i really enjoyed this chapter, it was nice to see Harry open up. Often he is written as a very closed off character so I like it when he's a little more open. Can't wait for more! |
SLYNNR chapter 12 . 4/7 FILLER YES BUT IMPORTANT TO THE STORY FILLER. ALSO AT THIS POINT WE ALL NEED THINGS TO LOOK FORWARD TOO. |