Uhhhh Robin explicitly tells Pyrrha to use her semblance to launch him, even tho she keeps it a secret so he (as far as she knows) shouldn’t have any idea what it is, and yet she doesn’t react at all when he mentions it

I’m just a fox person and it’s a bow and arrow! I love that line, that’s some Hawkeye energy right there. ‘We’re fighting an army of robots, the city is flying, and I have a bow and arrow. NONE of this makes sense!’

Chapter 4; pretty solid, just a few spelling and grammar issues you might wanna proofread agin to fix, but nothing major, also nice to see the plot progressing, as well as having a gamer character that doesn’t completely break the this worlds rules and power scaling in 6 months. It seems perfectly balanced so far, as all things should be

When ruby is talking about protecting people you skipped a word, and forging a regular sword, especially up to the standards someone like ruby would have, that could take 3-4 days, and I imagine two swords that turn into a bow might take longer than that. I don’t mean any offense. I really like this story, so I will be pointing out these kinds Of things. I mean this to be constructive criticism, not flaming, I’m just too busy binging this to gush over it completely, I’ll prolly do that once I’ve caught up on the latest chapter

Okay so you say the settlement is small, nothing but a few tents and cheap houses, then call it a city and slide to there being multiple shops, which feels a little inconsistent description wise, also you said Qrow had a mission there but then they just leave almost immediately, was talking to someone in the bar all he had to do? Also when he levels up to 2, his stats still said level 1

Why did robin talk about joint beacon even tho at that point, there had been no real indication of what world he ended up in, and also he was just fucking murdered, yet some regular kid is just rolling with the isekai bullshit

The story you described isn't my type of story, so obviously I'm not interested in it, but It's your story just because I don't like it or someone else doesn't that doesn't mean you shouldn't write it. If that story is what you want to write then write it. Out there somewhere someone likes it and will support you for that story like I (hopefully did) for this one.
Anyway that's my two cents on your story and I' m not exactly the wisest person in the world in fact half of what I just said (or wrote I guess?) is probably extremely cliche and stupid but, hopefully the message is clear, write what you want to.

When I imagine how Robin looks I just see Robin Hood from fate extra but with fox ears.

Nice to have you back author man!

good story so far
just a bit of a tip bit you could replace robin's lucky guess part about how he knows she's a cat faunus and say she smells like a cat. And faunus naturally have better sences than humans so it would be believable lore wise if that's how your looking to fit in.

VELVET IS BRITISH! BRITISH I TELL YOU!
Otherwise good chapter, tho there were a few grammer errors, like with Nora's story.

It seems that you taking your time with this chapter made it even better than the other ones. Great chapter

Thanks for the chapter!

Yeah, I'll be sticking around. It's always nice to watch improvement happen before your very eyes!

*gets hit by his own attack*
Frieza: i felt that brother, i felt that...

Some typos, a bit of confusion with P.O.V.s, and some half-wrong quotes, but I think with time will come improvement. Perhaps go through and read the chapter yourself before you post it.

Patiently waiting for another chapter!