I love this Omg

Lovely! I loved it with all my being :)

thanks for your nice story!

Lovely story.

Nicely written

I have enjoyed this story very much.
You managed the revelation and response waves of Charles and Elsie very much in character, up till the nail-bitingly suspenseful admission by Charles in Chapter Ten.
You have resolved this emotional quagmire very satisfactorily in this chapter. Elsie is prepared to Listen to Charles' heartfelt confessions. She has remembered that she loves him, that you can be human , therefore slightly imperfect, and that no-one should be too judgemental, including herself. Charles is prepared to be really open about his past go her, even admitting , to him, shameful parts of it, to her. Very importantly, they forgive each other, hug each other, and promise to always talk to each other about their concerns. All very admirable.
And you have written this so well , building up the tension and suspense like a coiled spring, which you let go in a so welcome and satisfying release at the end. Good writing and thank you.

Aww...what a talk! This was really good. I hope you decide to write more Chelsie stories. Thank you!

I've so enjoyed this story. I've waited eagerly for each chapter :)
I hope you will write more stories in the future.
Stay safe

What an absolutely excellent story!

Beautiful ending! I like how you built up the suspense in this story and kept us wondering what had happened until the last chapter when all was revealed. Congratulations and I hope you continue to write chelsie stories. x

wonderful ending thank you

I need answers, congratulations. Waiting for much more.

I’ve been waiting for this! Of course they needed mugs instead of cups. (lol) As always, this is excellent! Thank you.

Can’t wait to read next chapter!

I was hoping as much. cant wait for part 2