Cant wait to see what your going to do with this story!
Keep it up

damn you and your cliffhangers.

I have only a few questions

1. What is the update schedule going to be like

2. Is Cameron going to come back ( loved that character)

3. (Not a question) I'm glad your back man or woman [ I totally didn't assume your gender ] tbh I loved your other fic regardless of others opinion with it being something new and exciting. With how this one is going I can tell it will be even better and hope you have a wonderful time writing it

Sincerely, That Guy

Well I didn't read any of the previous versions but if this is a 2nd rewrite then it must be thoroughly thought out with quality writing. So far it sure looks like quality. I'd rather not read the previous versions so I can be completely surprised with this new one. Or do you recommend I read the rest?

I read the DXD Gamer's Tale and I really enjoyed it. Your writing is fantastic man, so I'm super excited about this! I promise, if you write it, I'll read it!

Yes! You're back! Personally, I loved One Gamer's Tale, and I can't wait to see more of your work : )

What is the pairing and your update schedule.

It’s a good start I’ll be waiting for an update

I don't want to sound like a prick or anything but you can definitely tell the difference between LSD and a pill. A tab of LSD is smaller than the size of a pupil while a pill is well... a pill

I have read all of the first before vivus codex was even created and I read that too. I quite enjoyed the original so I am looking forward to this one tyrius

Sincerely,
PixelatedWriter

Well I just want to see what types of improvments there'll be in this rewrite. I just hope you don't go for the cliches there was in the first one, because oh boi was this story filled with cliches. And also I hope the MC is at least a bit wiser this time around, and also keep his emotions in check because it seems that either he's retarded, or his emotions are actually impeding on his reasoning, which should be impossible with Gamer's Mind but oh well. No for real the cliches man, the previous one was written like a kickstarter game that wouldn't even sell enough copies to make profit, you don't have an original world, at least be original in the way you build your 'game' because, no matter how dumb it would be to actually do so, you wrote the previous fan-fiction as if it was good to actually embrace the game aspect of his life. The events were entirely 'game' like, so make an intersting game at least.

An odd first quest, but I can appreciate the originality. I also noticed there was no MP bar or Intelligence/Wisdom stats, so I'm curious about that. I loved the original, didn't like Codex, got high hopes for this one, but it's too early to call it yet, obviously. Good start though, definitely.

Keep up the Good Work!

Sincerely, Pagemaster

I like the idea, biggest complaints so far is his excessive swearing (reread it and I'm sure you can find quite a few instances where the swearing is a bit out of nowhere and unneeded. for example; the "shiiiiicould be done away with completely and actually be more entertaining than if it was kept in. another complaint is how he quickly thinks its all LSD hallucinations, despite hallucinations rarely ever being so strangely organized nor controlled by the users will. He should've reacted when he grabbed the Halberd and realized that it wasn't just in his mind.

That's all for now

Interesting start, it's a bit better than the original but hey, it's only the first chapter. It's too early to judge so I'll follow for now

Thanks for the chapter!