Reviews for Ash's New journey
Jekke604 chapter 14 . 7/21
Cynthia Mew's ideal trainer
Jekke604 chapter 13 . 7/21
I liked the new motto
sabotagem1969 chapter 14 . 7/9
to be continued
Lightningblade49 chapter 14 . 7/7
I think Cynthia might be getting a legendary soon which will upset mewtwo given he wanted to get away from mew but if his trainer gets together with her...well he's stuck lol.
thor94 chapter 14 . 7/7
fun chapter.
And fun that mew somewhat described ash for the trainer she want, could be hard for her to find someone similar to ash (at least in sinnoh)
darkworkangel chapter 14 . 7/7
I like it sounds like cynthia is mew's ideal trainer I can see Cynthia with a mew please update again soon
StormWolf150 chapter 14 . 7/7
Is his Sinnoh legend Giratina?
Guest chapter 13 . 6/30
I can see Mew being pampered once caught by Ash haha. Like a little Princess. This will be funny.
Hope you're doing okay!
UIxInfernape chapter 13 . 6/27
I'm guessing dawn caught the ursarang
Hayane234 chapter 13 . 6/11
why do i get the feeling that mew will let itself get captured...
sabotagem1969 chapter 13 . 6/1
to be continued
thor94 chapter 13 . 5/27
also ask how you will deal the contest, since ash need to win 5 of them.
And about contest, kinda hope you plan ash also given a poketch at same time as dawn (put it on his other wrist). could be fun to see ash taking all the high tech pokemon stuff, he was banned by anime writers for long.
Cobb chapter 13 . 5/27
Great story so far! You have a few grammar issues here and there, but it looks like you’re improving over the course of the story. I’d probably refrain from doing POV parts of chapters as the majority of the story is in third person. Switching POV just causes confusion for the readers. Keep up the good work!
Kibaikasu chapter 13 . 5/27
When you say "dew", you in fact mean "due". Dew is condensed moisture.
lcwintersoldier chapter 13 . 5/27
So how come you gave turtwig to James instead of ash wouldnt it be better to give James a non cannon pokemon ?
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