Gosh I’m so glad I stumbled upon this story, it’s beautiful! Thanks for sharing!

Loved this !

I absolutely loved it.

What a great first story out the gate! I’m a sucker for a good fic where Donna sees Harvey have a panic attack, I always felt like we were robbed of that in the show. This had just the right blend of angst and sweetness. Thank you!

Wow. What a great short story. Often times with a short story it’s difficult to get drawn into the story line. Like there isn’t enough time to get fully vested in the characters or plot. You managed to pull me In Right away and hold on to me until the last word. Well done.

Why is it that I love Harvey’s panic attacks so much? They just really do it for me and that probably means I have issues. Oh well. Lol. I love how vulnerable he is when they occur and any scene where Donna is the one who brings him back is a big winner to me. That’s why I wrote one in my last fic and May work it into my current one. Hahaha.

Loved this! Write more please!

This is great! I especially like the idea of not everything being perfect for them, even post-canon (but still going well, I live for happiness). I think you transmitted the panic attack really well — it’s all about the emotions and what the reader can feel while getting that image. For me it worked perfectly. You have a real knack for Darvey writing! I like the dialogue as well. They feel very them, if you know what I mean hahaha this is awesome. Keep writing!

Cannnnnot wait for more of your writing. It’s fantastic. You’re awesome!

Lovely, thanks for sharing

This was beautifully written, both the attack itself and Donna coaxing Harvey through it.

You have a lovely pace and flow to your writing, it reads so I was hooked and immersed in the story from the first word to the last.

Wonderful!

This is a great onde-shot! I like you writing!

I've always pondered the Donna-helps-Harvey-through-a-panic-attack scenario but your additional layers of post-series bliss made the stakes even higher. loved it!

Luiza, como eu te disse, tem tanto sentimento aqui. Dá pra sentir o pânico do Harvey. E ficar deprimida porque isso tá acontecendo com ele de novo :( O final foi doído e bonito demais.
Sua escrita é linda e eu espero que você escreva mais.

Excellent