Nice updating here. Great job, as always.

Keep the good writing.

SUCH A WAY TO START THE CHAPTER! XD
Poor Hal, i mean he deserves it, he pretty much sign up for that but still, Jessica always forgetting she is pacifist around Hal it is such a good joke XD
Anyway, i like how you introduced another character of the other shows, i would like to see them on the canon show
I will be honest, i am more a fan of Garth/Supergirl and Karen/Carter, again my own taste but you are writing them on such a way that is acceptable, so keep going girl!

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW
well like i said THIS it is a PRETTY INTERESTING ROUTE!
Taking away Kara powers was a nice touch, but on my humble opinion, Hal stealed the show XD
Like, give the poor guy a rest! First Superman, then the girls corner him like he is guilty (and he is)
SO FUNNY!
Also the drama, the drama and the comedy, totally a fan

oooooooooooh giiiiiiiiiiiiirl
THIS
like
THIS!
i am just gonna say that i indeed like, pretty interesting route you are taking there!

wow
just
WOW
i mean, i was not expecting to becoming a fan of the idea of see Barbara and Hal bonding and becoming friends, but hey, here we are!
Also, i must say that your way of making Hal look less... well like a jerk for what he did it is pretty good, no matter how much Hal and Carol loved each other, after what happened they could obviously not be together, toxic relationships are a thing to be aware of, so i am truly impressed on how you managed this!
ALSO i am trully curious of how will Jess take this, i know she is onto the Pacifist way but ooooooh girl, when she finds out what happened there is gonna be blood

* smirks* "Just friends" oh my, this title gave away everything, but i still love it! overall nice chapter! Barry and Babs are other of my OTPS of the show, not my highest lelel but still a fan, so you can only guess how much i am loving it!

aaaaaawwww! this chapter was so cute! i like how you decided to focuss on their cousins relationships and how do they do their daily lives, i would not mind more episodes like those on which different characters bonded and everything, so i hope to read more like those on the future!

YAAAAAAYY! THEY HOLD HANDS! SO CUUUUUUTE!
Also, those questions actually raised my curiosity at first
And no idea of who got the lights out, but still, nice touch!
I am honestly barely capable of hold myself to know more! keep going please!
Also, adding John was a nice touch, he is a bit of a idiot, but i guess a cameo does not hurt anyone

Comment:... INCREDIBLE! MORE JESS, MORE HAL!
* coughs* but now being serious, thought they are my main OTP, i just LOVE how you are managing their personalities on a good way and developing their different relationships, so far i love it! i mean, yeah i already read the whole story and i am just leaving comment behinds, but still! those few first chapters are definetely my favorites so far!

Oficially my favorite chapter of the lot! because it is the start of the story and because i like the idea of Hal eating salads because Jess continues to annoys him until he convinces him XD
And the obvious romantic implications
Hal x Jess for life!
Aside of it, great way of starting the story! hope you make more in the future!

* claps claps claps* so far i am amazed how you are introducing the characters of the previous programs as well on this story of yours, truth be told, this show it is amazing! the friendship between Kara and Oliver, the feelings between Zatana and Oliver, EVERYTHING!
on my humble opinion I DESIRE FOR MORE JEAL (Jess x Hal... yes, i know it needs a better name) but i like the route you are taking, gooooooo girl!

NIIIIIIIIICE! i am really into this story of yours! forward and with valor girl! (it is a saying, it means that keep going or something like that)

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!
THIS IT IS INCREDIBLE! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR MAKING THIS!
Jess and Hal are also my main OTP of this series, so cheer sister!

Nice one here.

Lisa Star... or Lisa Snart? Yep, I recognized her.

Keep the good writing.

Again, very cool one. Nice job with all the characters.

Keep the good writing.