Reviews for Azure Cosmos
Reinkasahi chapter 3 . 8/12
When moaarr?
Dr. Serenity chapter 3 . 7/26
This... Is actually great! To quote a meme "I came here looking forcopper and I found Gold".
I was really expecting another Shirou (or Shirou-like copy pasta) going in front melee-ing Sirens but I'm instead pleasantly surprised by this :)

Hoping to see this update again sometime soon and great work so far!
Followed and Fav'ed - A fan
Razie.B chapter 2 . 6/25
Did you know that ever since the Prison Tower event, Dantes has been some sort of guardian for the player, especially from mental attacks, like from Aphrodite's brainwashing in Olympus. Can you make it that Ritsuka inherited some of his abilities kinda like Mash with Galahad?
KiroZen chapter 1 . 6/16
Good to know that you haven't kicked the bucket and are as healthy as can be in these trying times.
GM0127 chapter 3 . 6/10
Never knew I needed this crossover as badly as I did after reading it. Also, Ironblood science is indeed SEKAI ICHI!
Sistamara chapter 1 . 6/9
This and the other FGO x-over is what got me into Azur Lane lol, keep up the good work
Soulbow109 chapter 3 . 6/5
Really glad I found this story. So far the characters and their interactions are pretty entertaining. Got to ask, why does Prinz hate the whole luck thing? Sadly I don't recall that trait of hers.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/4
lol in canon ritsuka unable using basic reinforcement
Dusk and Fall chapter 3 . 6/1
Awe yeah, this story is Goood on good. this beats the Anime by a LARGE margin and my gott prinz is just to funny to not love .

this is exactly why I oathed her, and you got all the ship girls personality right! I'm honestly impressed.
Keep up the good work, you doing justice to the Azur lane lore in more ways than one
Razie.B chapter 1 . 5/31
So Gordolf was mentioned in chapter 3 . So does that mean this story takes place after Cosmos in the Lostbelt? If yes, what happened to the Crypters that are still alive, like Kadoc and Peperoncino?
Azumus chapter 3 . 5/31
Vinci has a pretty high opinon of Ritz, doesnt he? Trusting him with her prototypes and all without even doubting. Thats people who went through the apocalypse together, amazing.

So the shipgirls cant do normal magecraft, but act somewhat like heroic spirits? I guess it leaves more freedom if you want to adapt some of their ingame skills. Cool that you cut them off from magecraft, stacking different magic systems usually ends in op mess.

Going by his interactions with Eugen there, i guess Ritz is still the 'Hero master' from Chaldea on the inside
Razie.B chapter 3 . 5/31
So,how ofter will you uodate this story? a chapter a week? a chapter a month?
Razie.B chapter 3 . 5/31
"Ironblood science is the best in the world"

Is that a Jojo reference?!
Polyfemus chapter 2 . 5/30
it does feel a bit like an exposition chapter, but those are needed sooner or later so it's fine, also we got a lot of juicy information.

So Ritsuka here has various mystic codes at his disposal huh, that sounds versatile. I am guessing you want to make him participate in battles more or less directly.

I personally feel that he agreed too quickly to help Azur Lane, but also was basically pressed on by the Siren attack so I guess it's fine.

Bremerton is top tier waifu and nobody will convince me otherwise, good inclusion there.

Anyway, good chapter.
DemonRaily chapter 2 . 5/29
I will rant now like a petulant child, so you can straight out ignore this review and stop reading, it has no value to anything whatsoever outside of therapeutic one for me.

The idea of "Tohsaka Sakura" genuinely upsets me even in an alternative universe, Tohsaka family are pretend aristocrats that consciously chose to follow the worst aspects of magi society to look more "western" and important than they are. The kind of high strung morons that refuse to learn how to use a land line phone while Zouken's 700(or was it 500) year old ass is doing investment banking. So Sakura taking back the name of the family that completely betrayed her in all possible ways is disgusting to me. Rin is a sweet girl with a lot of flaws, most of them comes from the "Tohsaka" part of "Rin Tohsaka". I genuinely think that Rin is really lucky that her parents have died and Kirei raised her wrong on purpose as a joke, because otherwise she would be an out right villain.

Sorry, just needed to get that off my chest
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