Reviews for The Guardian Chronicles: Divulgence
BloodyHeart12050 chapter 14 . 6/26
Naruto would probably be a conflicted and a bit upset. For sure she will have questions.
nothingNothing07 chapter 14 . 6/25
I really liked the flashback it gives us some more backstory. The convo between them was very tense but he deserved her anger. Naruto will flippppp out and maybe talk to her bf about it. I would like to see the second pairing deepened more it would be so cute if they both talked to Naruto about it.
Xoxospider chapter 14 . 6/25
Keep up the good work!
gatitapri chapter 14 . 6/25
Q1: I liked it
Q2: I like it
P3: The poor man will end up half dead and with a concussion

Let me translate this into Spanish please
AnimeandFanficLover chapter 14 . 6/25
Another great chapter! Honestly, the conversation between Jiraiya and Narumi was spot on! I agree with Narumi's opinion on Jinchuriki, especially given that- you found out later in Naruto- that the Tailed Beasts only became "evil" because humans were assholes to them first and they are just retaliating. This goes to the concept of people believing in their own lies so much, they eventually convince themselves that it's the truth, then go around inadvertently brainwashing others to have the same belief until it gets SO out of control that it becomes a disease. Even gets worse when realized the First Homage is the one who started this whole shit. Yeah, Madara had a hand in it too, but I'm pretty sure Hashirama knew Kurama was being controlled since the Sharing an controlling Tailed Beasts is pretty common hidden knowledge. So- to me- he is JUST as guilty for the way Tailed Beasts and Jinchuriki are being treated. Peace my ass! That's the type of peace you get when sacrificing someone else's.

Now for another thing about the conversation. I can totally understand how Narumi thinks the people of the Hidden Leaf and Elemental Nations are fucking insane! I would think so too! Yeah- in Naruto and ONLY Naruto- you can say it's the norm because that's how they were raised or brainwashed into thinking, but anywhere else- HELL NO! And they wonder why most of the villains of Naruto are fucked up in the head. And Narumi's accusation of them just telling "Naruko to just suck it up and get over it" is EXACTLY what they would've done, especially considering no one gives a crap about her- not even Team 7. You know the guys who were ACTUALLY supposed to be supportive after her failed mission instead of just blowing her off or BLAMING HER! I'M FUCKING TALKING TO YOU, SAKURA!

Truthfully, if this is how Naruko reacted to Jiraiya, then I can't wait to see her put the verbal beat down on Kakashi and Sakura. ESPECIALLY SAKURA! Mainly after finding out Naruko's pink-haired teammate's victim-blaming (basically saying Naruko dying would be okay as long as Sasuke came back to Konoha) was the second reason for her granddaughter's mental breakdown. I wonder why she would say when she found out how Naruko's team practically neglected her and treated her like a parasitic third wheel. Oh, boy! I can't wait for that can of worms to come flying out, if it ever does! I hope it does!

Gaara and Yaoyorouzo (I don't know how to spell her name)? It would be a nice pairing, but you have to think of it long-term. Would actually work? Could you make a long distance relationship work? Because Garara is STILL the Kazekage (he has an entire fucking village to look after) and Yao is only a high school student. Or are you going the star crossed lovers route? They start dating, but- because of responsibilities and obligations- they decide to break up because it was just not meant to be, despite how much they really love each other and REALLY want it to work. The only reason Naruko and Todoroki is working because- after everything's that's happened- Naruko could go "Fuck, Team 7! Fuck, Konoha!" (like Sasuke did) and never go back again. And the hell should she when she's treated much better in Japan than she EVER was in Konoha?

Man, I ranted enough. Again, awesome chapter! Hope to see the next one soon!
Chris-Tina chapter 14 . 6/25
I admit I kinda like minato but well when he told the third hokage to show that his child was hero straight after the kyuubi attack well that was kinda dumb for the supposed genius the fourth hokage was supposed to be but well you live you learn...pretty soon though when he sees the type of life she had when he sees naruto again.

I fell in love with narumi..oh happy day.. like really happy day because well it was we'll deserved.

I hope she feels justified because I say it again jiraya could have done more I get she looks like minato and all but srsly all those years he couldn't have at least send a letter or scrolls or toys the wallet naruto had does not count since it was just one time like damn.

Ps does naruto have a quirk like charm speak
Ps loved the update
TheBeauty chapter 14 . 6/25
Minato for being so perceptive made the worst mistake of his life the moment he went with his biological father. It was kind of a weird choice to go with the one he doesn't like when he has a loving family with no explanation at all :/
I wonder how will Narumi react when she finds the Jiraiya was probably the most responsible adult in her life.
Naruto will probably throw a worse fit than Narumi did.
Guest chapter 14 . 6/25
Narumi is definitely going to be interesting reaction when she meets Naruto and I wonder how the Bakuago family would react once they know what Naruto went through as a kid. Naruto is going to blow a gasket once she finds out the truth about her dad.
batmanuchiha chapter 14 . 6/25
in response to question 2 i think narumi is a bit upset so she can't see the big picture that minato chose to go and become a shinobi
Guest chapter 14 . 6/25
One thing I wish you had included in Jiraiya’s conversation with Narumi was the story of how Minato and Kushina fell in love after Minato rescued Kushina (was she already the Jinchuuriki at this tone) from those Kumo kidnappers that were taking her back to Kumo (most likely to be put in some kind of sick breeding program)!
StrongGuy159 chapter 14 . 6/25
Cool chapter continue please.
Amaterasu53 chapter 14 . 6/25
Q1: I figured Minato was taken by his father, but to learn he went willingly was a surprise, and it made sense with your story
Q2: I totally LOVED Narumi going off on Jiraiya! So deserved!
Q3: I think she'll freak out. Hopefully she'll be okay, but how would anyone react to finding out that the village she'd been working and doing everything (just living, even,) to protect, even though the villagers were trying to kill her, etc., was the same that worshipped her father. She was supposed to be a princess, and instead look at how she was treated. Honestly, I hope she says she'll never go back, and that she never will!
Like I always say, I hope that at that point, her sensei and other abusers learn of her refusal and why - as well as her HERITAGE - and we get a long, long peek at their reactions. Please?!
Guest chapter 14 . 6/25
Oh hell yeah, that explanation character was awesome! Narumi is definitely where Naruto got her “head bitch in charge” from!
harlequin320 chapter 14 . 6/25
great chapter, all three sections were enjoyable but the Narumi and Jiraiya scene was my favorite, I especially look forward to seeing that particular story line continue, I am also curious to see how Naruto and Bakugou's relationship evolves with their kinship confirmed, in any case, keep up the good work, I look forward to more to come
yukicrewger2 chapter 14 . 6/25
Considering Momo's quirk, was it made literally from her heart? Like does it have a couple of her heartstrings in it?
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