HOHO de alguma forma, algo assim era totalmente esperado, tem um certo teor canônico até hahaha. Esperando por mais capitulos xoxo

If it is all the same story line why the long pause between updates. seems your not planing on moving forward at all till like x mas at a rate like this.

I really like the feel of this story, so please don't take this as hateful. Your writing has really improved! I'm always excited to see people coming back to their old works and making them better.

Harry feels really well portrayed here: the brief fiery outbursts but caving to Dumbledore's demands quickly because he's tired of fighting - that read well. But - I know a lot of people really like the snarky banter between Harry & Malfoy, it just feels really out of place for the two of them at this point in their story. Even before Voldy had died, Malfoy was much more subdued after all the things he'd witnessed and endured. Him sauntering in and making quips that rile Harry up just seem *extremely* out of character for him.

It would just be really sweet to have Harry recognize that Draco's changed a lot, and build on that.

I'm also really uncomfortable with the idea that it's just okay for other parties to contract people into binding agreements without their consent. Dumbledore isn't even Harry's legal guardian; even if he were, no way would a modern society allow anyone to just contract other people into a marriage. Lucius could have won the war single handedly, but he doesn't have the right to literally bind another person against their will as a reward and I would hope any lawyer would dismiss this contract straight away. It's also conflicts with the idea that Harry is heralded as the Savior and there isn't much he could do wrong now, but a lawyer is just okay with a very unpleasant contract being forced on him. This very much should have gone in Harry's favour.

Perhaps Harry goes into it more willingly because Narcissa saved his life, and, seeing how much Draco is changed, views the contract as a way to pay back the life debt Harry owes her. Or it's a fake deal, to save the Malfoys' image: Harry has to go around & *pretend* to be in love so it helps re-legitimize them in society again, but then they start to like each other for real. Anything but basically slavery (hey I did a thing, you get to pay me back in humans).

I'd love to see you continue this story! I'll definitely keep up with it, and I hope you will continue writing it. Looking forward to the rest of your work!

Better start already. Keep up the good work.

Love it so far and seriously can't wait for the next update

This first chapter sounds really promising! Please update soon!

Really like your story

I’m excited!

This plot sucks... Don't waste ur time rewriting this horrible plot...u r good write... So please take my suggestion and change the plot itself...
A war hero changong into a death eather Malfoy will surly put heat of the public on Malfoy... Opposite is which the goal of Malfoy...
Albus ya.. He is stupid enough to sell harry when he was ready to kill harry... So surprise there...
But harry liking material needs then his freedom is kind if silly...
Forced marriage between rivals is romantic plot but the your reasoning is kind of dumb...

Loved it can't wait for more.