This is an interesting story that you’ve got here, with what I think is an interesting take on a supreme being OC. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Love

Thanks for helping with the vivid virus going on. This story is really fun to read, please keep writing more chapters.

Looking foward to an update

I hope chapter 14 of Voyage Unto Infinity comes soon

Awesome chapter.

I like it. Keep it up if possible. Take your time and stay safe man.

I like this

AHA! Someone finally took the time to think about the concept of my older character and what they can do besides just "blah blah blah just another lame self insert OC blah blah blah."
Why do you think I chose someone who was old enough to have seen the world before the collapse happened? The world was still green in places before greed and corruption had taken hold.
The story the guest reviewer is referencing is The Supreme Beings of Life and Death by Ashkar.

Well, the first REAL question is, What about the character death's?

Team, Blade's of Darkness & Team, Foresight, what will happen with them?

You say, you watched the anime, i would agree, as i had watched it much the same,
i still didn't like what happened though.

I had read another story, where the blade's survived, by being reborn,
with a, wand of reincarnation, being reborn as a supernatural, half human, half creature,
though it mainly focused on Ninya as the protagonist of sorts(i forgot the name (T_T) cry face)

Ahem,

Would it be possible, to add a sort of, SCHOOL, to the story?

Where, "gramps" would teach the nazarick-ians about modernization, saying that,
in their past of, well, OUR, time, we had the possibility to do a great many thing's,

but because of humanity's GREED a world of exploration and science, and wonder,
was replaced big time corporation's, who only thought of themselves, dooming the home-world.

But, here, in the "new" world, where technology is still in its infancy the world could, be better,
they would just require the right guide for it.

The "gramps" of nazarick managing to live, in the last vestige, of a humanity that was not,
"enslaved" by the corporation's that exist now, he wouldbe able to tell them "stories" of a better age.

Sorry, I couldn't control myself there.

Huh, pretty lax yet enough at the same time!

And compared to other self OC inserts, yours is the same yet somehow different. As if you have originality

I Love this fic its refreshing to see a Older person who talks and acts like a american

ohh baphomet that name
the one in charge in the purgatory of the seven hells and of the different demons of the seven deadly sins

Awesome intro.
Looking forward to more.

LOL! And we thought Momo had problems with Albedo