Reviews for Journey to the Other Side |
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Nanny chapter 8 . 7/17 I'm spellbound! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/24 Thanks OackenCougar. I've enjoyed reading the first 4 chapters and can't wait for the next. I have a continuity concern about this chapter though... Death Watch blasted through the observation done, then forced a door into the ship. This feels like it would cause lots of depressurisation and take out quite a lot of the unprepared opposition. Oh, and I spotted a funny typo, you have some rouge (french red) troops, instead of rogue ones. ;-) |