i understand that english is not you mother language but please try to learn a little bit of grammar...
aside that though, i truly loves this fic, its rather short but its straight to the point...

update please

For English not being your first language this was a very good attempt. Your main problem is grammar and connecting words. To, the, they, ext. Love the premise of the story. If you really want to improve your English get a beta to correct your chapters and then read them side by side so you can see the different flow and sentence structure. best wishes!

everything is fast pace.
everyone is out of Character and yes, even louise.

might I remind you that everything and everyone in nazarick utterly hate humans?

i find it stupid that all their conversations is forced for the sake of plot. oh well.

yuuuuuuuuuhui!
legit banget

Great chapter the power of the staff is finally revealed.

Nice, I likehow this is progreessing, maybe longer chapter though but that up to you .

/Daniel

Looks like she'll also get ainz's powers, maybe turn undead?

Hola
Disculpa por no escribir en inglés
Pero he tenido una idea
Y si aiz adopta a luise como su hija?
Eso es lo que se me ocurrió

Un saludo y me gusta mucho tu trabajo

What you said, english not good, HOW-EVER, as the story moves,
i hope your english CAN improve, Yes?

You know Ainz would consider this theft of his staff.
You know what Ainz does to thieves?
It's not pretty.

Writing is poor, but plot... Ainz is coming for his staff.

Im really loving this fanfic. Thank you for your work.

update please

It's 2020