I have really enjoyed your story.
Cant wait for next update

Love it!

If I was looking forward to it, I love it, greetings from Chile

great chapter update again when you get the time

Love it.

LOVE IT!

El único que hslbs español, buena historia y espero te vaya bien

Glad to see the rivalry between Scott and Jackson is still there. And I did love the bit about Jackson seeing Scott as a rival, but hating himself for that – perfectly in character, well done!

Though I did feel the whole spanking bit went on a little too long. Kinda hope in future it's done more quickly and move on. That said, I liked the end bit with Derek and Scott. How he views Scott as his favourite and is sorry for what happened, but still has to put him in his place. Good character development here!

I'm enjoying this story so far. I liked the contrast between the two punishments with Derek sensing what the two very different teens needed from him.

Well...that's a sucky ending. Very depressing. Kinda hoping something happens to change it, but I won't hold my breath. I hope you have a good reason for doing it though.

In the mean time, at least they're getting the huge complex for themselves. Curious if there will be a time jump into the future at some point, so that Derek can add new wolves to the Pack and fill up his massive new home?

If ever there was a more deserving pup. Poor Scott

Yeah, Lydia as an actual werewolf! Also, loving the additional lore in this chapter. I didn't feel the monologue from Stiles to Isaac about what had previously happened (the season 1 stuff) was necessary, at least not all at once, but since it brought them closer together, I guess I can live with it. Though I'm hoping Isaac will get more confident soon. I like seeing him like this cause he is green compared to Scott and Stiles, but I like Isaac when he's confident and snarky. Also loved that addition of how bitten werewolves can be stronger if they're weak when bitten, especially because of the hint towards Erica!

Not too sure how I feel about Feral being Second. At first I thought it was a bit bold for him to assume he'd get the position and reckless for Derek to give it to him. I think Scott could fight him for it. But at the end there he kinda won me over. I do like him as an OC and an addition to the Pack, so I'm glad you've kept him around. Though I feel when/if Cora shows up, she should challenge him for the position of Second.

Another exciting chapter! Well done!

Good start! I'm super excited to see where you take this story. Not gonna lie, one of the things that pulled me in was the Lydia not being immune bite. I like what the show gave us, but I always wondered what she'd be like as a werewolf.

You did Derek great here, I feel you captured him really well. Stiles too. Wasn't too sure about Scott, but if that's how you want to use him in this story then cool. Felt like he was getting bagged on a little too much by Derek, I mean, I agree Stiles is smarter but it wasn't like Scott was an idiot. He just struggled balancing school and everything supernatural. Just something I wanted to say in his defence.

I do love what your setting up here, the future of Derek's Pack with Scott and Stiles and the whole compound idea. It reminds me of LouisaHale's story Teen She-Wolf, though hers is set after all this kind of stuff gets established. Oh, and I enjoyed the added lore stuff of Scott and Stiles instant submission to Derek, as well as their need for an Alpha, otherwise they'll fighting between themselves. I really loved that addition. Can't wait to see what else you come up with for the lore and changes.

I'm really looking forward to seeing Lydia as a werewolf, and please don't make me wait too long before you add Erica into this awesome Pack/story your building.

Love this so far! Everything you’re setting up is perfect. I’m excited to see the pack family form and all the drama that comes with it

another great chapter , but killing Melissa is so wrong on so many levels