Loving it!

I couldn’t help but chuckle at Order 66

Jon would only be known as Aegon Targaryen, just like how Robb is known as Robb Stark not Robb Tully Stark. Lyanna married into the Targaryen family, so she becomes Lyanna Targaryen neé Stark. Ned is a hypocrite, he was raised in the South by a Southerner and didn’t affect his standing within the North.

As long as Robb learns about the North he’d been chillin. Anyways this is a interesting fic, I’m surprised you chose Dooku as Aegon’s master rather than Ankain/Vader.

First thing I want to say is sorry I haven't reviewed a lot of your story's in a while. Real life is a pain in the ass and I figure I'll review this chapter since it's been out a while. I read this chapter again and it kicked ass! Man Aegon tore shit up when he dealt with Balon Grejoy and all the iron born. Hopefully we won't ever see those pricks again. Yara has escaped and honestly I hope she can make an honest living with the crew she has and start a new life in Essos.

Walder Frey is dead and good riddance to that slimey old cunt. Hopefully with all the treasure's that Aegon has secrued he can rebuild the bridge into something more pleasent and safe. As for House Bolton I'm glad no one will have to ever worry about them again considering what they planed to do to Ned Stark and his family, along with Aegon's.

Speaking of Ned Stark I honestly wish you had him punch that prick Theon Greyjoy after the shit he pulled. You should have also had Ned give the idiot a tongue lashing that would have Olenna proud with Ned pointing out what a fucking halfwit he is for choosing a bitter piece of shit like his father who threw him away for a family that actual cared for him. Well now his ass is going to die for sure.

I'm glad that Tommen and Myrcella are all right as they didn't end up dead.

But I am honestly dissapointed and disgusted with Catelny Tully Stark for what she was going to do. Seriously her family was exposed for the crimes they commited and she tried to kill Aegon off just because she couldn't let go of her petty hatred? Also she is such a fucking hypocrite about her crazy sister's bastard child. Hell this woman even wish/prayed for Aegon to die from the pox disease.

Well all I can say is sucks to be you right now Catelyn Tully. You reap what you sow and now you will never see your family again all because you had to be a pig headed, selfish stupid bitch. Hell I hope next chapter you have Blackfish give her a few choice words. This is good and I hope to see the ending soon.

Good Luck VFSNAKE.

Not bad, though it was very similar to the original timeline. Would have been nice to actually use some sort of force power.

The tragic future Aegon saw in his Force Vision will never come to pass, with all the instigators of that future punished accordingly, some alive, while most others dead, primarily Houses Frey and Bolton gone for good. Catelyn Stark sentenced to spend the rest of her life as a servant surrounded by bastards, Theon Greyjoy awaiting his own sentence, which could be either execution or being sentenced to the Wall.

Uhhh...not bad so far. Though a lot of filler at the moment and I’m confused with the name Jon was given. Your following the books, so Jon had a half brother called Aegon and mentioned this already. So, it would have made sense for Jon to be given another Targeryan name.

I’ll keep reading, though I’m hoping to see some sort of Star Wars element. Shot yourself in the foot, with using up count Dooku in just one chapter.

He's ruthless, cruel and practical. Then again, he's a sith lord basically xD they'll be too fearful of him to oppose him openly at least. I wonder if he'll prepare for when they're discovered by aliens as his master is an alien himself

Hmm bloodlines makes things complicated. If you're asian and married a westerner, after a few generations any traits from your asian ancestry will disappear once your descendants keep on marrying on the west, aside from throwbacks. If their dragon blood thins, how can they tame their dragons, worse if another house have more valyrian blood than them and found themselves in control of dragons. Jon must have some way to strengthen the valyrian blood of the main family, or perhaps bonding with a dragon strengthens it as some sort of evolution. The valyrians must have come from somewhere of a humble beginning

BUUUUUUUUUUURN! Good chapter. Never would have thought of the thing with Cat.

Very enjoyable read from start to finish I can't wait for more chapters to come and enjoy

ageons forgiveness to his uncle is rather weird, did he not say himself that ned is more loyal to his friends then his family. he is not even capable of keeping his wife in check.

catelin stark the women who caused the downfall of house stark in canon, gods how i despise that women

you use a lot of words to recount things we already know and explain details you changed but very little of actual content is happening

im not to fond of this bashing you started. if it was roberts plan all along to get rid of the targaryans then why does he hates being king do much?

your story is a little one dimensional

well this chapter was less then subtle, even the way jon speaks comes clearly from your mouth cause he knows things he shouldnt.