| Reviews for A Trip To The Fall |
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   kevinbellemore chapter 6 . 7/31 Nice job there I wonder what story you will work on next someday |
| kevinbellemore chapter 5 . 6/22 Nice job there what's next? |
| asharkey chapter 4 . 6/20 Yess! Fantastic chapter! Good job and keep up the great work! |
| Finalcool720 chapter 4 . 6/18 nice job and fun dipper has an idea that ben is the aliens looking forward to more |
| kevinbellemore chapter 4 . 6/18 Nice job there |
| Finalcool720 chapter 3 . 5/30 looking forward to dipper finding out ben is four arms and the next chapter |
| kevinbellemore chapter 3 . 5/30 Nice job there |
| THECLoD-3215 chapter 2 . 3/28 Heyo, nice story! I absolutely adore the concept! Especially, the whole Gwen maybe having a little thing for Dipper, because he’s technically older than her by two years! Haha, I think it’s a really cute idea, however, I do have some issues with it. Grammatical issues. I’m unaware of whether or not you are a native speaker or simply just ignoring grammar and spelling, but it is impeding on the reader’s ability to understand the story. I would advise using Google Documents to assist you with grammar and spelling. They have a very thorough grammar and spell check that can be helpful to even professional authors! I’d also be willing to assist you if you have any questions! Again, brilliant concept! I can’t wait to see what you have in store next! :D have a wonderful day/night! |
| UltraPhantom chapter 2 . 3/26 Make Dipper suspicious of Ben cause of his watch |
| Finalcool720 chapter 2 . 3/25 nice job looking forward to more |
| kevinbellemore chapter 2 . 3/25 Nice one its good |
| Rexfan1333 chapter 1 . 3/23 Is Ben gonna be with anyone? Interesting crossover |
| Finalcool720 chapter 1 . 3/23 nice job so Gwen and dipper cool so couple name Dwen or Gipper and looking forward to more |
| kevinbellemore chapter 1 . 3/23 Nice one there |
