Oh wow so sweet! And this is what I would have wanted Jay to do on the show! (well much sooner haha) I hope Erin feels its not too late! I hope you continue this sometime it’s really well written!

Love this story it’s so good! I saw this story and knew I love your writing! Hope you’re doing well during these hard times! I felt bad for Ashley but you can tell she already knew where his heart was.

please continue your story, this is so good and im so excited to see what happens next! i feel like everyone has forgotten about erin that gives gives me life.

The one night stand baby is an interesting addition. I wonder how Miloh will play out in the rest of this fic. I’m glad Jay was brave enough to start the convo about her leaving. I wonder what Erin is going to say about Jay saying he still loves her. Erin obv hasn’t moved on either. This fic is very interesting.

I love it. Can’t wait to read more!

Mandy

Aww that was a really good chapter

Loved it. I’ll be honest I was a little bummed that the kid is not Jay’s but I am very interested in what her response will be to Jay’s confession of love. Update when you can .

Welcome back and I really like this story! Can’t wait for an update! Love Jay and glad Hailey isn’t in the picture.

Like your story. So glad you wrote Upton as only a brief fling as I just don't see the chemistry with those two on the show. While I never liked the character of Erin, I did think her and Jay had a lot of chemistry and potential. Feel bad for Ashley but at least Jay is honest. Hope you continue, whatever the outcome, it is a good story.

Great story. Please update soon.

Great story. Please update.

Can't wait to read your next chapter !
Please continue and update when you can...

Its amazing

Aww I love the idea and the writing is amazing! can't wait for the next chapter

Omg this story is going to be so good! It has really intrigued me! I can't wait to see where you take this! :D