Reviews for The grass is always greener
Guest chapter 2 . 6/16
Please update
katrin lily chapter 2 . 5/16
This is a well written start. please show snape's reaction when he finds what was used to spike the drinks.
codm14 chapter 2 . 4/27
Good story, dual magical core is an interasting idea. Looking foward to how this story plays out.
Frank chapter 2 . 4/21
You completely glossed over everyone's drinks being spiked. No reaction at all from anyone, no questions asked, just straight on to the next scene. You need to flush those scenes out. How could that be so short? That seems like spiking the drinks of every student would create a major outrage. That would be a serious crime and I'm sure the other professors would not just let it slide and let Dumbledore start singing a song instead of investigating.
I'm sorry, but this story seems to just be an exercise in getting as much in as you can in as few words as possible. There should've been more scenes in the Greengrass home as they taught Harry about his family and his lineage and the Wizarding world. The scenes on the train with Draco and then again with Ron need to be shown. This establishes character. You're doing too much telling and barely any showing.
Karou WindStalker chapter 2 . 4/21
Looking forward to reading more
The Pootamis chapter 2 . 4/21
Good start to the story so far. I like where this is going but have one question that i'm sure others might ask. Since Harry is the heir to both the Potters and Blacks will he have to take two wives? And if such i'm thinking it would be Daphne and Tracy with the way this story is being written so far. Look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
Dillonga2 chapter 2 . 4/21
i love it and i can't wait for the next chapter
timbarney110 chapter 2 . 4/21
Have mconigal expose Scabber(Peter Pettigrew), in his first lesson in transfiguration. Since he’s late have that be him volunteering, in most classes the teacher will give a summary on transfiguration, like animagi, have her show that the spell to force them back to human, allowing Sirius to be freed from Azkaban,
GodoftheSeas21 chapter 2 . 4/21
Great chapter. Loving the story so far. Great idea putting Malfoy in Gryffindor
doctor of supreme awesomeness chapter 2 . 4/21
So far I like the story! Awesome crumble horned snorkak!
mayawene chapter 2 . 4/21
Thanks for this story ! ! ! ! !
NightFuryFanfic chapter 2 . 4/21
I'm really looking forward to this nice work.
Yaw6113 chapter 2 . 4/20
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
Mikeblade chapter 2 . 4/20
forgot to add I could be wrong I never did check each story to see only checked how many had the same name so yes I could be wrong but hope not.
Mikeblade chapter 1 . 4/20
the writer did not steal this I checked there are like 30 harry potter stories with the same tittle.
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