Reviews for The Greater Good
Rogue-eL chapter 4 . 4/20
Now you have my attention.
Dovahkiin chapter 4 . 4/19
Good chapter. Cant wait for the next
jgs237 chapter 4 . 4/14
Not really a big fan of how Artemis has to train Sam I felt that it was kinda forced and something that is done in other stories, but who knows maybe you will make it work. I will have to just wait and see. Also I felt it was a little out of character for Zeus. Knowing his personality and how paranoid he is I think he would want to kill Sam immediately epically since he as no connection to fate, but we will see.

Im guessing Aludin has awoken already? Or will he awaken later?

Lol nice little squeeze with Harry being in the prophecy. Though I hope wizarding kind nor Albus know about the Gods yet. It would be a nice juicy surprise to Purebloods that they are not the top of the chain.

Keep up the good work and hope to read a new chapter soon
Akakiru chapter 4 . 4/8
The unwanted Mama Artemis started
Padfoot chapter 3 . 4/7
Wow. This is story is different. Wonder how it will play out.
Love the idea of riverdog of Sam going to Ilvermorny School and on his 4th year he attends the Tri Wizard Tournament, it would be cool in the first task he is able to talk to the dragon in Dovahzul (The language of dragons) shocking everyone since no wizards before him can talk to dragons or understand them. Also since dragons are immortal will we see the return of Paarthurnax, Odahviing, and Durnevhiir? I hope we do they should still be around probably hidden in the tallest mountain so probably Mt Everest.
While at camp I guess when they try to teach him ancient greek he won't be able to learn it since his mind isn't haywire for greek but rather Dovahzul.
Looking forward to the next chapter hope its soon!
Guest chapter 3 . 4/6
You’re right, I don’t agree with making the demigods stronger than the DB. Not saying I’ll stop reading this or anything, and hell, maybe you’ll write such a thing well enough that I won’t mind it, but I’ve seen way too many PJO fics do similar things and it’s been crap every time. Hopefully that won’t be the case here, as I am honestly enjoying what I’ve read so far.
Akakiru chapter 3 . 4/6
Dude the Dovahkiin must be OP to stop Alduin second he is a Nord they are like Vikings but Cooler
jgs237 chapter 3 . 4/6
Good chapter
Im guessing at the end that it was Artemis? Don't know why she would appear especially since Sam is a boy. I can understand if it was a girl but oh well.
So the monsters don't know what to make of Samuel since he would smell Dragon which would technically be a monster smell. I am also guessing Grover smells it too and is trying to tell Luke Thalia and Annabeth that he's not a demigod but a monster. I wonder if he will be able to get into Camp Half Blood or will the magical barrier stop him from entering.
Not sure how I feel about nerfing the Dovahkiin and making demigods stronger but its your story and well see where it goes.

Update soon
Riverdog chapter 2 . 4/4
I like this I really like where this story can go. You have made a good start. Maybe you could make the chapters a bit longer? I feel like it could add more depth.

The name Samuel Jones is cool but I believe it would have been a cool easter egg if his last name was Septim. (Wink wink)

Lets see here since you are multi crossover I recommend that you just go with Harry Potter and not the MCU I feel like people could get lost with too much. With Harry Potter I feel like its easier to incorporate because since Samuel is reborn he should be reborn with Magicka from the Elder Scrolls. Instead of going to Hogwarts he should go to Ilvermorny School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. It would make sense since he would be living in America and that is the school for North America. He stays at Camp Half Blood during the summer and the rest of the year he goes Ilvermorny to study his magic. From here you could have him go to Hogwarts with his school for the Triwizard tournament. It could be Ilvermorny Hogwarts and Beauxbatons were he is the Champion for Ilvermorny. This way you could introduce him to the Golden Trio.

I read jgs237 review about having Akatosh claim him, and I have to say I like it but want to add more spice. Besides having only Akatosh claim him you could also add to where he is a Champion to Talos God of War, Magnus the God of Magic, and last but not least Kyne Goddess of Storm and the one who gifted men with the Thu'um. This could send the Greek Gods into a frenzy since they wouldn't know who these Gods are. Since Akatosh is the Dragon God of Time will Samuel sense Kronos and the other way around? I would assume so since he is the Titan of Time.

Pairing wise don't do a harem please its over used. I would say between Annabeth, Hermione, Fleur, or Daphne.

Well these are the ideas I have for now but ill review again if I have more ideas for you if you wish to use them. Keep up the good work I really like were this story can go.
Akakiru chapter 2 . 4/3
The Dovahkiin is DemiGod or Demihuman because of the Dragonsoul and Blood would the Monster even attack him? A Dragon is power alone the name
jgs237 chapter 2 . 3/31
Mmm interesting start. Looking forward to see where this goes.
Wouldn't Samuel still physically be a Nord? If thats the case he should still be extreme tall and strong even is he is 7.
Im guessing the monsters ignore him or don't notice him because he doesn't smell demigod since his blood is that of human and dovah. Also his soul is that of Dovah.
I hope you don't make it to where the Greeks Gods know who or what he is. Im kinda excited for his claiming. I think everyone at camp will be shocked and confused who his Godly parent is when they see Akatosh symbol above his.
Also I think you should have him break the great prophecy, after all the sister of fates can't actually control his fate since he is a Dovahkiin and an Elder Scrolls Hero meaning he is in control of his own destiny and can break fate.
Pairing I say Annabeth and Sam.
Update soon would love to see where this goes.
itwasmevor chapter 1 . 3/26
I’ll admit, having Alduin win is an interesting way to start this story. I’m not sure though how Nirn is supposed to become world of the MCU, Harry Potter, and PJO, (IE, Earth) but I’ll give it the benefit of the doubt for now and assume Alduin eating everything basically reset the universe.

I’m also not sure about Akatosh and Talos “Fading”. Some of the Divines I can understand, but those two are a bit different. Talos achieved CHIM, and Akatosh is literally Time. Maybe it’s just this version of him that’s faded away, reabsorbed into the whole Akatosh/ Auriel oversoul thing, and Talos decided he was bored of this reality and left.

Anyways, me being ES lore nut aside, I look forward to seeing where this goes.