Your writing is good, but i hate how you have made Holly. I often like drastic changed Harry characters, but yours is hardly more than a house elf. Don’t get why she is so desperate to kneel and serve at Aragon’s feet.

No it's almost over! I don't want it to end! It was a great update, but sad because of the deaths. Hopefully there will be some happiness in your next update. Idk what you have planned for the ending but I'm excited to read it! Idk I hope Thuri gets some peace and joy before everyone else dies or sails.

Nice chapter!

holy crap that was amazing

Amazing! Very curious what’s going to happen next

Great chapter. I am totally lost with the dunedain characters but I loved Kreacher and Holly's scenes.

Very interesting, thanks! I find harry to be a little too emo for my taste and would love to see a bit more divergence from cannon too, but the writing is great. Thanks for all the hard work.

This is an awesome story! I have binge read it from start to finish! I'm curious to see how the others will react when Holly goes back to normal...

Ahh the anticipation! Can't wait for the battles! Also can't wait for how you incorporate Holly into future events! Thanks for the update! I hope to read more from you soon!

Great fic really like it

Found this story recently, and have loved it so far, and just read the 5 snippets you posted. They all are interesting, but I most enjoyed Wednesday's Untitled OT3, Pivot Point, and Harry and the Three Trolls. The Quintwizard Tournament for me was right behind those 3 (though still interesting); I'm not really sure what to make of The Veil. I think it would be fun, but I'm not sure where to rank it without a longer snippet.

Another wonderful chapter! I'm looking forward to the next one on the edge of my seat!

"I have done very little of renown, besides ridden with the Fellowship. In fact, I do not think my presence here has made a whit of difference."

This line seems almost mocking to the reader. Because yeah, her place her has changed nothing. What's been the point of these 150,000 words? Seems like nothing. Holly is terribly passive, and when she isn't, her actions do literally nothing. She gives the stone to Eowyn even though we know Eowyn would've managed without it, as it's canon.

I can only wonder if you plan to move away from canon later (though at this point, I have zero hope for that). But if you do, again, what was the point of making us read 150,000 for that, if it ever happens?

Good luck with the story, but I'm unfollowing it. It's been honestly an enormous waste of time.

Thanks for the chapter !

I liked The Pivot Point the most. But I wonder if pairing is Glorfindel/fem!Harry (as in 15 year old Harry, or is it Holly/Bronach that is from future). I am a bit confused about this matter.

Also, The Veil seems interesting will be Sirius in it! Alive Sirius! So, I am looking forward to this one too.