Omg! I love it so much! PLEASE update! I think this is the best book I’ve seen so far!

I really liked this one-shot. The idea was original and the execution overall was impeccable. There were some parts that were just genuinely funny, and other moments when I could really see the hidden emotions of both Percy and Annabeth. I love longer one-shots, and this was a great read. Amazing writing too- I could hardly detect any major grammar mistakes. Excellent job!

It's totally cute and typically Percy I love it Hahah :D

Okay, this is good. I like the flying squirrel! Super cute. You changed tenses in the middle of the story from past to present, though. Did you notice? And shake it up a bit! It’s a little cliche, but you’re ok because it’s canon so this is normal. However, some new stuff might be cool. Great job overall!
This sounds like it’d be fun to write from the looks of it. I’d love to beta, seeing as I’ve got the time and have chapters of my own story written. Expect to hear more from me!Lyric

Great story, it makes me wish I had a pet flying squirrel now!

I don't hate Jasper, but they're not my favorite either. The circumstances of them getting together seemed artificial, with the Mist making Piper think they were together and Jason just kinda seemed to go along with it. At the same time, Jason's memories had been wiped, erasing whatever may have blossomed between him and Reyna in Camp Jupiter.

You need to make more like now! This was amazing! As long as the short or long stories are good I'll keep reading ;)

THAT WAS SO CUTE YOU SHOULD DO A PART 2! Like what happened on their date. Also I love piper and Jason together I don’t really see why no one likes them together

I really liked this! Also, idk why people don't like Jasper, i kinda like it.

ps. are you talking about Jason-Percy bromance or the Jason-Piper ship? Either way, my answer still stands