This was a wonderful chapter. Despite some of the more serious undertones to aspects you touched in previous chapters, it was lighthearted and fun. A nice interlude before things get dark and serious in the future. Thank you for the wonderful chapter and I can’t wait to read more!

XD that lol girl is a handful

Ah yes, the Power of Love and Friendship!

Hey! I only recently found this fic and I'm quite interested. It's not often you see a YYH story. It's only a few chapters in so until things pick up I'm not going to go into much detail. I'm not 100% engaged with with story or the OC yet because not much has happened and I've only got a sense of her personality so far. Whether there is more depth to her remains to be seen. The writing, while good and descriptive, has an almost impartial feel to it in my opinion and can sometimes become mundane, like I've read it a bunch of time before in other fics and books. That's another reason i hadn't become totally engaged. Of course that could just be a me problem (and it's not like I could do any better) I just feel it could be more emotive. Hinami's character is intriguing though! Her being a Spirit world worker and an onmyogi is not something I have seen many times before especially her use of shikigami. I hope to see more of her abilities and jobs. I also hope she has an influence of the characters and plot of the manga. It would be a little upsetting if she was just relegated to the sidelines without having and change. I will definitely stay tuned for the nexted chapter. Keep it up!

SUCH A WHOLESOME CHAPTER!

I loves this episode,it showed how sweet he can be

I loved this chapter! I can’t wait to see how things progress in the next chapter!

Another nice chapter! I do have some constructive criticism for you though, and I hope I'm not coming off as rude. You tend to use words like exclaimed, declared, etc. instead of just a simple 'said' and while using them every now and then is okay, most of the time just using 'said' is for the best and helps to keep the flow of the story going in a more natural rhythm. There's also a looooooot of dialogue in this chapter, and I would recommend writing more action along with it. It's still a very good chapter, though, and I look forward to reading the next one!

Best regards,

-ZH

Take as much time as you need for your updates. Don't feel the need to rush yourself to meet a deadline. While it's nice to know when to expect your chapters, your overall health takes precedence.

And as an overall chapter it was wonderful as always! I've been rereading the manga a lot recently and I love having your story to go back and forth between with each of the stories. I personally prefer manga Sayaka compared to the anime version. She's just so much cuter and playful and I love her relationship with Yusuke and Shouta. It's such an adorable storyline and I loved seeing your take on it.

I can't wait to read more!

I'm really liking this story so far! It's a pretty unique start, and I look forward to reading more of it.

-ZH

This is one of my favorite Kuwabara-centric storylines and I really loved the way that you wrote it. Also I love the drawing you made for your cover. I can't draw to save my life so consider me jealous of your skill as both a writer and an artists. Keep up the good work, can't wait to read more!

Heck yeah! Now if only to wait for Iwamoto to get his Just Desserts!

I adored this chapter so much! I can’t wait to see Yusuke’s reactions to all the stuff he doesn’t know about, like where she works and so on. Thank you for another wonderful chapter and I hope to read more soon!

I really like seeing Hinami's reports on Yusuke. I always think it's interesting when you get to read an OC's observations. I'm excited to keep reading more about Hinami and her interactions with Yusuke and Botan! Also your story made me want to reread the manga so thank you for that, I forgot how enjoyable manga can be lol

This is an interesting take on Yu Yu Hakusho. I'm also happy to see other spiritual beings involved as well. You rarely hear about onmyojis in fanfiction (well in my experience). I like the world building you're doing here as well. Can't wait to see how this story goes.