Can't wait for more

I'm at work but I'm reading this.
You are awesome. This is a great chapter.
I like Ginny. And I don't get why others don't like her much either.

Great chapter.
Thank you so much.
HarryxGinny

I really like this story so far! I really hope you update again soon! I also agree with your pairing choice and more development will do it wonders. On a side note, will Ed ever tell the others how he lost his limbs? Could Skeeter get a hold of that info? That would be disastrous. Anyways, keep up the good work I can’t wait for the next update!

okay high key i really like this fic you're doing a great job

I like that Al and Winry saw more time to be themselves, firstly. Additionally, Draco's taking a lot of verbal abuse in stride; his self restraint in this is remarkable.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Excited to see what happens next.

Tragic! I’ve reached the end!

Seriously though I’ve been really enjoying this fic.

Amazing! I can't wait for another update. You did very well in sticking to a lot of what happens in the books while still letting the FMA characters influence the story. Beautiful writing.

This awesome!

Firstly, I hope you have good luck with your online classes. Secondly, I'm sorry for jinxing you with writer's block two weeks ago when I mentioned how quickly you can write. Forcing a chapter rarely makes for good work, and I'll wait as long as it takes for the next chapter.

As for the story, I feel like Al and Winry aren't getting to do much. I'd even say Winry hit more people with wrenches than she had lines. It's fine though, this is a story about Ed and the incidental character with a scar who also happens to be in the spotlight.

With both Al and Winry at Hogwarts, it's a toss up which one'll be at the bottom of the lake. Winry will trigger a more sharp and sudden anger in Ed I'd imagine, while Al would set Ed into more of a simmering boil, plotting revenge where with Winry it would be more instant revenge. Or that's my take at least.

As for pairings, Ed x Winry, of course. (What's that? They're already basically engaged? Woah! That ship sailed easily enough.) As for the rest, I say go with the flow of wherever the story takes you.

Lastly, isn't Ling almost Ed's age? Or was he making a crack about Ed's height?

you know would love to see Roy and Riza to be able to come to Hogwarts as well
as I just want Harry (manly Harry) and kids to meet them
as seen similar things between Harry, Roy and Riza like I think it would nice for Harry who is an orphan to meet a an adult orphan like them and just them to bond with him (want see their point of view)

and love to see parental Roy and Riza helping Ed out more (wanted to see Roy reaction to seeing a Phoenix)

If you are doing pairs, I would ask for Harry and Hermione.
Because Hermione was there for Harry and Ed since the beginning. Helping them, believing them. And they honestly Clicked so well together. Why she ended up with Ron will always be a mystery to me, since they are always snipping at each other, and Ron literally puts her down because be is jealous of her and it's really pathetic to be honest.
Ron was a total Dick always has been if you look at the books carefully. I'm a little upset that the friendship started again. He never properly apologized. Just gave a half assed excuse. And he was still a Jealous Twat.
And Ginny is creepy and a total bitch too.

And at some point it'd been cool if they became friends with Neville and Luna and those 2 becoming a couple too would be sweet. And they are honestly they type of people who would be true and loyal friends.

This was a great chapter! I can't wait until the next one also for pairings HarryxGinny would be great and so would RonxHermione.

This really is such a fun story!
I'm not picky on ships between those few, I thought Harry and Hermione had more chemistry back in the day since they're best friends and all (and Ron Hermione seemed to come out of the blue) but Harry and Ginny is really cute too!

Oof tho Ron, putting your foot in the mouth like that. Tsk tsk. When even Ed's gotta tell you haha
If Al is reading Ed's books, are he and Winry going to get wands? I know it's not relevant to the story really but I'm curious if that was just a detail or a bit of foreshadowing :0

Very excited for the Yule Ball! And I cant wait to see who's been picked to be Ed's special someone in the lake between Winry and Al. And how pisssssed hes gonna be about either one. Especially given hes clearly still possessive of both lol

Thanks for the update and long chapters! I await the next one!