I loved this story i really hope there is a sequel.

The story was wonderful. I can’t wait for the sequel

This is a good story

Nice job. Things will be different. With Harry there to be his wingman, John's relationships with Elizabeth and Rodney will be very different. I look forward to the sequel. I assume you'll put up a notice here when you start posting?

I guess you could say the Wraith are rather like dementors, but there will need to have been some changes to the species to totally fit. Not hard to postulate, though. I love how Harry's unconscious decided he wanted to go to Atlantis.

Interesting take on Elizabeth Weir. I'm enjoying a grown up Harry who can stand up for himself and I'm sure he has learned to be pretty intimidating by now.

Nice beginning. I think you have John and Jack well characterized. I'm not sure Elizabeth will forgive him, though. LOL

Keep it coming plz it is good

Great work...fun and original. Hope there’s a sequel! Thank you for sharing.

This is so jarring to read, Author. At this point in the francaise, Jack has already seen 'magic' that the Ancients used, and the power of Ascended beings.

loved it

bonne fic!
et la suite?
harry ne voulait il pas hermione avec lui?

please continue this , I really love this idea and would love to see were you take it. I'd also like to see what will happen when they meet Todd and Ronan.

Loved this!

Sequel! Yes, and please!