ngl kinda sad that you didnt keep when merlin says athenas glare gives him raging boner causw i found that really funny lmao

Amazing as always. Thanks for the update!

More please:)
Hope to read more soon:)

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Love the story. Keep up the amazing work!

I’m thinking maybe Quetzalcoatl the Aztec god of wind, air, and learning for who the deity might be. I’m probably extremely wrong though. This is an amazing story, and I love your writing and how you think of things!

nice

Great, this sounds like Incan gods/goddesses, or maybe Mayan.

I enjoyed this chapter, and I think you misunderstood me, while I actually like FGO Merlin’s abilities I was talking about his personality in my last review, FGO Merlin is hilarious and I think you could use a bit of his personality in your Merlin it would be a lot fun in this story.

I really like your story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

nice chap

lol

Omg. This story is bloody amazing. Please update this soon

I really like the direction this rewrite is going, but I think you could make Harry act more smart, he behaves like a regular demigod of Athena, which is ok but you said that he is smarter than his half-siblings. I really liked your Merlin, but after playing fgo i cant see Merlin in any other way, the dick wizard was comedy gold, it would be funny if you could include aspects of that Merlin in yours. About the third member of his quest, I think Beckendorf would be a better option, because I do not see Harry bringing his younger sibling in a potentialy dangerous quest.

sigh boys, have to agree with Clarissa ; another good chapter. Salem fun place. And please the story is AU. HP is picked by another person to raise how in the hell can he be same as cannon. The boy was totally suicidal and depressed for 90% of the books. Goodness HP fanfic and PJ story how can one expect it to be close to cannon, just silly. love the story