This story definitely made my afternoon better. I always felt frustrated at how all the emotional implications of the assassination attempt and Defiance were just thrown under the rug. Thank you for rescuing them with perfection.

I love your story fanfiction. It got a little dark there where Beth was reading his own funeral. But he realized what Olivia had to go through. I wish it was a little longer I love that it went in and out of their paper each other their love for each other it was deep have a good day waiting for more to read from you

This was very good. I wish it was how the show went. Please write more!

I love this one shot. My favorite will always be Olitz actually talking through their issues. The show has dropped the ball many times on plights that should have been discussed, which is why I love that I can turn to stories like these to address them. Thank you!

Great writing! I loved your take on Olivia planning his funeral.

That was so enjoyable to read. You're right if these two could only have learned to talk more about their feelings, they could have spared one another a lot of unnecessary heartache.

That was so good! So much more then we got on the show. Thanks for your spin on this. It always bothered me too that Liv had to plan Fitz’s funeral.

This was really good

That was good!

Beautiful! Really good! I enjoyed a lot reading it!

Beautiful and so them...ridiculous in the best ways.

Great writing awesome work

Awesome chapter!

Very interesting. We got so little from the series about these little details that would normally feature so prominently in life. Its great when creative minds explore could-have-beens.
Thanks for writing!