Reviews for Kamen Rider Zi-O: Heisei Hero King
Lazar Nikolic chapter 4 . 7/22
please mikel97 please dont abandon this story continue to write we wanna read more
Darth Stigma chapter 4 . 6/13
there are far to many spelling error's and misplaced words in this story i can't even list them in this review, and this story has really piqued my interest.

If possible, could i ask you to PM me so i can list the errors and send it to you so you could eventually correct the chapters spelling proper?
Kaigu-hunter chapter 4 . 6/5
I'm glad you didn't make Sento lose his memories. Though I would have loved to see Build genius fight along side Zi-o, in the end it was a good fight!

Can't wait for the next chapter!
Guest chapter 4 . 5/30
Yusake Godai (Kamen Rider Kuuga) and Shouichi Tsugami (Kamen Rider Agito) in this fanfic, one more give this fanfic should be Rated - M, so give it Rated - M because type of bad language use .
falloutplayer9 chapter 4 . 5/30
Amazing! I’ve read up to this chapter and I find myself impressed with each and every page! I truly do think that this fic you are writing is living up and surpassing every expectation I have! Keep up the amazing work, pal!

I’m on the edge of my seat just waiting to see what you will put out next!
CCSakuraforever chapter 4 . 5/27
Esta muy bueno el capítulo como le van en las peleas contra los another raider que paso con el encuentro con buil y la nueva armadura de izuku con zio que pasara en la escuela y quien sera su maestro
D3lph0xL0v3r chapter 4 . 5/26
KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!

YAY! YOU USED MY IDEA FOR IZUKU'S CATCHPHRASE!

COOL! DECADE/TSUKASA KADOYA NOT ONLY HELPS OUT Izuku/Zio IN HIS CIVILIAN IDENTITY; He Also gets someone who REALIZES It's Magenta, NOT Pink; Seriously; About time SOMEONE Got it right on the first guess!

Looks Like We get to See Fourze; as well as Cross-Z, Grease, Rogue;

I'm Eagerly awaiting the arrival of MORE Another Riders And What else you have in Store;

Good Thing that Decade(The Original; NOT Swartz) Helped him out YET Again!

Somewhere out there somewhere: ONORE, DIKEIDO!

I'd Love to see More Riders; Like the Gaming Rider EX-AID; Drive; Ghost; And Whichever ones are actually going to appear here!

WOW! I Guess Tsukoyomi DOES Have her Grandfather's Temperment; albeit she has a MUCH LONGER FUSE than the Short fuse her Grandfather had in the Past!
BloodRaven46 chapter 4 . 5/26
His name is Heure, not Wol. As you know, all Time Jackers' name are time related. Heure means hours in French.

Also Legend Henshin sounds bad. If you want something different like Kuuga's Chou Henshin or Ex-Aid's Dai Henshin, maybe you should use Rider Henshin instead. Less cringey and also a homage to Ichigo.
VoidLing chapter 4 . 5/26
A lot of bits from zi-o revised and maybe remove the legend henshin? it kinda feels gimmicky. Also if possible maybe not include opening and ending themes? its just unnecessary imo and sometimes it takes up 10% or worse half of the chapter. That's just my suggestion its your choice if you want to keep it either way I'll still be following where the story goes.
Omega Armadillo 300 chapter 4 . 5/26
Are you planning on bringing any of the Showa era Riders? Cause if you do, I would love to see Black come back.
TheOkWriter chapter 4 . 5/26
Don't make Izuku or Geiz say legend henshin, because I'm glad it was never used in the show. Also, you didn't use time travel, that's one of the major things in Zi-O, is going back in time and changing history of Heisei Riders, how could you not do that?
dsgundam00 chapter 4 . 5/26
Very good chapter... well worth the wait... liked how you completed the build arc in one chapter... I really liked that and you should keep doing it like this... keep up the good work... as to all your other questions I am fine with them either way... can't wait for the next chapter...
aemorrison7613 chapter 2 . 5/24
This has a lot of potential. You mentioned you weren’t going to follow the ZI-O story so I’m curious what changes you’re gonna make. It’s not my place to ask for spoilers but I’m too curious, Tsukuyomi had timejacker powers in cannon but they only came out when the plot called for them. Is she going to use them more here? And will Ginga play a larger role?
Kaigu-hunter chapter 3 . 5/12
How about: With this, Time is on my side!

It references Grand Zi-o's theme song: Next New World!

Could you have The Man of the Beginning:Gaim mentor Izuku? Giving that currently, his power eclipses Zi-o's big time!
Darth Stigma chapter 3 . 5/11
i have this feeling that the reason izuku turned into Oma Zi-O is related to something horrible happening to ochako at some point before hand which caused him to lose faith in heroes and caused him to turn into the tyrant that is his future self.

Just a guess on my end.
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