Ahhhhh wow thank you! I absolutely LOVE it! This made my day

This was an AMAZING and beautiful story! I would love for there to be another time jump so we could see them as a family together (perhaps with baby #2). You writing is great, is Ryan perhaps short for Orion to keep the constellation tradition alive (or am I just reading too deeply into it). I can’t wait to read your other pieces!

Love this one cant wait to see what you do next!

Lovely story. I’m a Dramione shipper.

Started reading this after seeing the other story. Really like the writing style. I find it easy to connect too. Good job.

This fic actually sounds very promising, there's an interesting plot. However I feel like everything is too fast, everything is rushed. Not the plot, but because of lack of description in a way, so it lacks of engagement in terms of connecting with the audience's imagination. When you leave too much information for the readers to imagine themselves, it's like you're only looking at a rough sketch of story board. What's missing is the emotions, the setting. And maybe the transition. This is why writing is such a beautiful thing. I believe you have the talent in writing. If you could include more description in your story, us readers could definitely feel the actual angst between the main characters here. Otherwise their relationship feels so sudden, and bland. No offence, just my opinion and I rarely made this kind of comment but because I see potential in you and this story, I thought that I should mention this. xx

It's a very good story and was a very easy read that made me keep wanting to read more.

this story is great. it was nice to read. I hope you will write the next story about draco and hermione.

Great writing by the author!
Very much enjoyed the writing style!
Hoping for more from the author

Great story!

Loved it :)

Really Fun story! AWESOME!

Hi. I've just read through this chapter, and I could tell that it would be a great story. The only thing that bothered me is the overuse of the subjects 'he', and 'she'. Those subjects or pronouns are the start of almost every sentence. This is the reason that this story can become a tedious read. I'd like to advice rephrasing the sentences so that the start of each sentence won't become too repetitive. English is not my first language so I definitely am not an expert but that's just something that I've noticed. Hopefully you don't take offence to my comment, and view this as constructive criticism.

Very good balance. Good story!

My favorite chapter. Love it!