Reviews for cat and mouse for a month or two or three
The Crownless Queen chapter 1 . 5/13
'Albus is worth ten friends' omg look at these babies they're so cute I'm not crying you're crying *sobs*
This was so good! I loved the Albus-Scorpius friendship in this - always a sucker for more diversity at Hogwarts too, so making Scorpius deaf was a lovely choice. I loved how quickly they became friends, but also that Scorpius eventually came to realize how much he'd relied on him? That was very good. Also I loved them getting sorted into Gryffindor
Scorpius being jealous and not wanting to admit it was also something that felt very real for him, and I liked that on the other end of things Albus was kind of trying to deny his own feelings in his way :p
I loved that their friendship also caused their parents to grow closer, because I absolutely loved that the Malfoys got invited to the Weasley-Potter party thing just as Albus and Scorpius had had a fight :p That's just amazing
And that ending was lovely aaa!
I really liked reading this :) Nice work!
Cheers!
MoonytheMarauder1 chapter 1 . 4/23
Omg, I loved this! You've written it so, so well. I love the idea of deaf!Scorpius, and you've written it so sensitively. I loved reading about the sign language—I've always wanted to learn—and was so glad that you didn't shy away from providing detail about it.

Albus and Scorpius' first meeting was ADORABLE. Scorpius was so nervous, bless him, so it was really nice to see Albus draw him out of his shell. I love the friendship they struck up, and I loved the progression to more-than-friends. It was very well done.

And then came Carla, and the boys were so STUPID omg. Like. You clearly like each other, shut up and get together already. XD I can't believe they iced each other out for a year. Honestly, though, the eventual make-up had me grinning. The ending "I love you" was just so perfect. Absolutely gorgeous storytelling.

You've made me want to write these characters again and again. XD You've done a beautiful job here; I really love this! :D
emryses chapter 1 . 4/19
shay. SHAY. S H A Y.
dear lord i missed you and your writing because this is absolutely incredible. your scorpius is so cute and i absolutely love him. your scorbus is so adorable and my heart is melting at this fic. i absolutely love you and your headcanons and your scorbus and ahhhhh. amazing writing.
Sunnyjma chapter 1 . 4/14
Girl, you made me cry. I hav so much connection and feelings with this story you wouldn’t believe. I cried so much, you really do hav a great empathetic heart. I... i dunno what to say, i think this is the best one shot in the whole entire world. I would love to read more about these two. I’m so glad Albus dumped that girl, it broke my heart seeing Scorp so devastation. Man, the feels... i am so incredibly impressed with this.
Very well done. Xxx