Could you please update soon again.

I like it! Plz continue

This story is great so far. I love the amount of detail in the story. Hope you update soon.

c'est génial, et j'ai hâte de découvrir plus ne profondeur l'histoire. continue comme ça

Yo I fricking love the level of detail and thought put into this. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

I enjoyed this chapter quite a lot, it is very well told compared to other Harry Potter/Star Wars fanfic's.
As this is one of the only HP/SW fanfics that have really drawn me in in the first chapter alone, most take a few chapters and so I hope that you continue to write this story and that it remains as interesting as this chapterthe entire way through.

a promising start

I look forward to reading more

loved the story waiting for next update

The anime characters definitely throw the story off and will continue to do so regardless of them being the only ones. Every time their name comes up it will pull the reader out of the story as if they were reading a Deadpool comic. It's not that they are anime. But that you are mixing at least three universes. Limit it to two unless it is a multiverse traveling fic, and even then it helps greatly to limit it to two at a time. Doing more just never works out well.

Take advantage of the very wide amount of existing in universe characters when you can. This limits the need for so many descriptions on appearances of characters which are forgotten quickly and aren't kept track of because of the nature of slow chapter releases read along other stories vs actual novels which are read individually. It's impossible for readers to keep track of, which is why in universe characters can make a story so much more immersive since it is automatic for those who know the universe already.

Interesting, cant wait to see where this goes!

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon..

This is one of the rare few Eternal Empire fics on this site, and I like what you've done so far. Please keep it up!

Dear Exodus12345,

if you're reading, know that not all Sith are bad and not all Jedi are good.

Sincerely, a Star Wars fan

So he is a Sith? I am not really knowledgeable about the star wars franchise besides the movies so does that make him a bad guy? I hope not. Anyway sounds interesting so I am looking forward to more.

An interesting setup, looking forward to what you do with it.