"mission kick -in-the -pants" ooh.. I love that...nice story... thank you so much

oohhh... No. i guess this is goodbye?

oohhh... No. ! kagome please be strong!

Luved it ! ;-) :-)

loved it!
M

I never liked Kikyo. But all she wants is love and happiness with the person she likes :(
I feel so bad for her. I would never ever want to be in her position.
But wow! Awesome story:D
I liked it so much! Especially the ending! .
Solid gold story.

great story! i really loved it! :D

Lovely story. Read it in one sitting. Love how wonderfully connected InuKag are even after all those years. You really can't fight destiny, sometimes. I felt so torn in this story, really wanting InuYasha to be with the one he truly loves but also felt horrible for Kikyo. Being the one he doesn't love is really hard for any woman and its sad that she doesn't get her happy ending. I admire InuYasha for being dedicated to her despite his feelings.

All of this story is sort of reminiscent of the actual love tirangle between those three. Like a modern version. Really beautiful writing. Can't wait to take a look at your other stories.

Thank you for the happy ending. :)

Wow, this was a pretty amazing story :) The drama played out so realistically, and I love your writing still. Can't wait to read more from you!

BEAUTIFUL! Couldn't help but comment, though it's been so long since the story came out, but I read it just now and I have one word. Absolutely, wonderfully, magnificently BEAUTIFUL! Ok, that's four words :P. But you deserve it! Thank you for the story, I enjoyed it immensely while it lasted, for it's unambiguously real plot and sentimentality. I'd take my hat off if I had one, but sadly I don't, so I'll settle for just showing the gesture *shows the gesture of taking the hat off*

Good luck for future works! Cheers :)

Meg.P

wow, excellent writing.

I loved it. You came up with the best/unoriginal/outside the box of thinking plot line. It was a refreshing change from the normal cliche instances. You did a good job at pointing out that fate can be a real bitch sometimes lol. At least they waited 6 years instead of 50 lol Anyways good job!

Is it so terrible that I laughed at Kikyo's miscarriage? Probably, but then again I have a black hole where my heart should be for her... Okay Okay I admit, I felt really bad for her, but am glad that there isn't another roadblock in Inuyasha and Kagome's way.

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lo that was awesoem i loved it. Short sweet and to the point you could say

Oh. My. God.

This story was just so beautiful! Honestly, I've been so afraid all along and until the end, when I saw the sentence "They broke up a month later"... But then, when I read that they were working on their 4th kid, I laughed, remember the 'what would have happened' earlier in the story.

There were a few typos but really, you have amazing writing skills I think.

And I totally agree about Kikyo &Inuyasha's love not being really strong since their trust has been easily broken, in the manga. Furthermore, Kikyo (not only has been tricked easily, while Kagome never doubted about Inuyasha's trust when she strongly believed he would come and save her when Naraku's Infant tried to make her darkness have the best of her-for example) wanted Inuyasha to become human so they could live together. It appeared to me like she didn't accept him as a hanyou while Kagome married him in the end as one. Well, yeah, maybe that was because of the Shikon Jewel not being there anymore... I wonder.

But this story is definitely one of my favorites. :)