| Reviews for Ascent |
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   Overload342 chapter 5 . 6/7 Please bring this back |
| Filtration System chapter 4 . 5/31 Well that devolved quickly. |
| PHD in oof chapter 1 . 5/20 The second person ruins it. Second person isn’t suited for works of fiction like this, it’s more for adventure rpg books and speeches/rhetoric, maybe poetry. This would be so much better in third or first person. It essentially unreadable as it is now. |
| D.N.guardian chapter 1 . 5/17 What the fuck ?, third person narrator point of view ?. It is the first time that I see him and he confuses me, I don't know what to say, although the story is good, like the majority of his works. I needed to comment on the third person thing, sorry I was upset. |
| Amal Chandran chapter 5 . 5/13 Why aren't u updating mannnnn...these are awesome... Plzxzzzx update |
| Raidentensho chapter 5 . 5/10 very nice. hmm, I do wonder if Cobalt will travel with Ash's crew and try to get Misty to loosen up a bit before separating after Cerulean city. looking forward to more. this has a lot of potential. until then, later! |
| deoxeyses chapter 5 . 4/30 Going good |
| deoxeyses chapter 4 . 4/30 Nice |
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/25 nice and update pls |
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/25 amazing and nice |
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/25 nice man :) |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/25 nice...,., |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/25 nice |
| Drake chapter 5 . 4/23 Please update Lemon with Nurse Joy |
| Flygar chapter 5 . 4/23 Nice! Cant wait for more! |
