I cant wait to read the next chapter

Look forward to the next chapter

How does the Spirit of Fire only have HALF A CREW!? Is it due to combat losses during the events of Halo Wars!?

Look forward to the next chapter

Even though the events of Halo Wars 2 didn’t happen, will the Spirit Of Fire have any of the tech from it? E.g. kodiak artillery, jackrabbits, nightingales, mantises, etc.

good job glad to have a new ai on board. keep up the good work

Love this story but if you bring in a ship from halo then bring in the Infinity led by Lasky

Cant wait to see ch:12/thumbs up

Hello,
(Hand waves in a friendly way)
I just like to point out a goof about Celerium that was mentioned in this fic's chapter: It was stated as a "virus" like it's a piece of software, however in the other chapters it was designated as an "element" like it's a part of the periodic table. Is this intended or an oversight?
(Confused emoji in a speech bubble appears above)
If it's the latter please fix it 'cause people will get confused or get some kind of heated debate about it.
(Deep Japanese bow)
Have a good day and Good bye
(Lightbulb of realisation appears above)
Oh one more thing:
(Pulls a small open lid black box out of nowhere and reach inside seemingly bottomless)
Here!
(Pulls a dead headcrab out and throws it down)
SUSTENANCE!

Hey would you consider doing a mass effect/ marvel (or dc) crossover similar to your halo stories?

will we get to see better versions of the odst visor?

The heavens screamed as the skies tear open revealing angels, their wings clad in burning vengeance, descending feet first into hell to lay justice on those who would harm their flock.

I love ODSTs.

I appreciate the clarification on Forge's part, it's reassuring that you've not just gave him super powers or something. That would be annoying. I'm mildly concerned we'll get a random Forerunner OC that shows up to cause an extra conflict for no reason, as authors on this website just love to do that for some reason, but you guys seem like you're more committed to making a good story than most. Really, there's a lot of characters to keep up with as is, so I would suggest to stick with what he have now and expand on them for now. Anymore and not only will it become a little confusing, but we'll lose room for more personal character development as we'll have so many characters that need representation. I mean, half of ME2 is just character development side mission, and you've already added another primary crew compliment's worth of main characters. So, while overall I'm not wholly opposed to the idea of more stuff being introduced as long as it's well thought out, I think it will detract from the experience. Good work with this chapter though, enjoyed reading.
I await more, as always

Wow I intended to make my previous review as a joke against simps, but looking back at it it just makes me seem as a jackass. To be clear though I was serious about the romance and stuff.

Even though I won't support your story there are hundreds other people who will love what you do with your story.

Anyways,

Peace

I don't think I could take romance of any kind for the Spartans. To me it just doesn't make sense. The only time the word spartan and romance would make sense is when the words "does not" is in between them. I'm sorry I don't even like the idea of romances and I feel as if it would ruin the story.

I can't read a story that I disagree with and one made by a simp. There are others who would more than likely enjoy it though, mainly other simps.