Reviews for Naruto: Betrayed and Banished |
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Hotwire23b chapter 7 . 6/18 Fantastically well thought out and written keep it up I'm in suspense |
jh831 chapter 7 . 5/2 Good story so far. Hope to see narko get put down a few pegs more in the future. Hope naruto uses clones to get better faster. I see him learning quicker than naruto, i could also see him be ruthless, but in control like zabuza. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
NANI chapter 3 . 4/24 LIFe or death?! Dang! Do I really have friends?! |
Guest chapter 7 . 4/23 yea dude im sorry, but as nice as your writing is, the whole premise of the story is horseshit. They could've mindwalked naruto with a yamanaka jutsu to prove his innocence, but nnoooooo, lets make the entirety of the konoha ninja council AND the fucking hokage completely fucking incompetent morons. |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/23 so they didnt think to have a yamanaka check his mind? "Great" story concept. Glad to see you have a pea sized brain, dipshit |
zero fullbuster chapter 7 . 4/23 Love it. Great update as always. I can't wait what happens next. |
Kage ongami chapter 6 . 4/23 Liked your story |
clio1111 chapter 6 . 4/23 Interesting story. Hope 4 more soon. |
Irina Akashira chapter 6 . 4/23 I've just found your story Good luck |
TysonG chapter 6 . 4/22 Nice chapter. Will there be a time jump anytime soon or will you be keeping this pace throughout the story? |
Hozuki Mangetsu chapter 6 . 4/22 I liked the chapter, Naruko is a bitch, I feel that it has something to do with the exile of Naruto, I hope he suffers e.e |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/22 I'm reading this while playing Morrowind during the quarantine. I can't help but view the nomad shinobi as an Ashlander clan. |
Banjo the Fox chapter 5 . 4/22 Good chapter. |
Banjo the Fox chapter 4 . 4/22 Solid chapter but fuck. |
Banjo the Fox chapter 3 . 4/22 Excellently done chapter. Certainly better. |