Great story so far and hope you continue the good work. Here are some thoughts for your story.

For new pokemon for Ash to catch he should get are Dunsparce, for some reason he tried catching one in kalos and Decolore Islands so he must want one. Zorua because it a tricky like battle like Ash. A Espeon (shiny) for that it suppose to be ash's favorite eeveution fron a interview, Lurantis because it a strong pokemon for Ash to have and a Golisopod to battle against Guzma's own Golisopod, Sandslash (Alola) because it seem to fit Ash the best out of all of the Alola forms.

Trainer that would be great to have would be Nando and Bianca (BW). Nando could be in Alola to find inspiration for Contest, and using his time to find all 4 Oricorio styles because they fit his battle and contest strategy. While Bianca is on Vacation from prof. Juniper to have fun. Remember Bianca always got Ash wet in Unova so imagine how bad it could go in a region fill with water, the pokemon school Ash a pool, so I could imagine Bianca knocking Ash out a window scaring the alola gang only for him to land in the pool yelling not again.

Also Ash could teach the the gang that they could multitask while accomplish their goals. Ash being a teacher/battler, Nando a contest/battler and Bianca a professor assistance/battler. Telling them how it can even help further their goals.

I prefer this over the other story much more.

Oh, I like this story. It's nice to see someone do Alola differently and take advantage of Ash's vast experience compared to his peers. Ash teaching others was some of my favorite parts of the anime.

As for Qita, I kind of want him to be an almost rival. Have the arrogance beaten out of him as he relearns that a Trainer's journey is never over, and there is always more to learn. All of Ash's rivals leave far better than they used to be after they spend a whole region trouncing Ash before he turns around and thrashes them in return.

It'd be nice to see him regain that love of training that he seems to have left behind for arrogance and snobbishness.

I like this story. There are characters we know and love from the series being brought back for what is so far a fabulous encore. I also like that Ash is grown up in this story instead of staying a kid like in the show. The first lesson that you had him put together I thought was very good. I work at a school and it is important to know how the different ways children approach a problem. Once you know how they think you are able to help them set and achieve goals for themselves, so I love where you had Ash start in this story with his students.

This is such an amazing concept! Ash can teach the Alola group so much more that no else will be able to teach them! But I am hoping that you show that he can also learn a lot in Alola as well. After all there's always more to learn and know.

The first lesson was interesting though I do wish you could have shown off more of the students interaction with Ash's Pokemon. It would be pretty cool though if you had these pokemon come back later on to help their pokemon train, you know?

Also for future lessons I think maybe you could have Ash teach them how to think out of the box and make up their own insane strategies? Like Counter Shield, Ice Aqua jet, Thunder Armor, Draco Meteor Climb or even eating your own attack to boost the power of your next attack? They're all strategies that could be useful in a variety of places: battles, contests and showcases alike. Though if you do something like this I think Ash should let them come up with one on their own with a little help and not just outright teach it to them, you know?

Anyways keep up the great work. Best of luck for writing and take care.

I loved the mention of Paul. He was the rival that is definetly the near opposite in terms of a few things when compared to Ash.
Will he or other characters come in? Cross, Sorrel, and Verity would be cool to see integrated into the story in some way, but this is your story so it's up to you.

well...i dow as expecting Lillie get Snowy egg someway (after all that vulpix did become an important part on her grow), and must said do was a nice use of bulbasaur there as her temporaly partner

what i didnt expected was for charizard to be brought out this soon for a lesson like this one lol but funny seen Kiawe getting frustate over him not listening (and lucky Ash told charizard to "behave" or the boy would know what happen if you try to force/frustate that type of pokemon)

I've been thinking, I can see Mallow taking an interest in being a Pokemon Connoisseur (If Ash covers that subject). Once Lillie gets over her fear, I could see her take an interest in Coordinating or Performing. Kiawe would definitely be interested in League battling, while Sophocles could really take after someone like Volkner, Wattson or Clemont. Lana... Okay, her's is a bit difficult

Interesting lesson. And I don't suppose that's Snowie's egg?

When Ash said they would use his Pokemon for the test, my first thought was Bulbasaur for Lillie so I'm glad that happened.

Please continue to update soon! I love this story!

Nice chapter, and don't stress to much. The first lesson was great. And i'm so excited to see another chapter, and ash's just reward of course. .

And i have an idea for another chapter (If u want it), you don't have to agree with it if don't like it.
- There's going to be a lesson which have a respective theme for every one of the students but with a twist to every one of them.
Like for example, Mallow: The lesson is going to be a cooking lesson which all of the students and there repective pokemon will be doing as a team (they will all be in the same team). The twist is you need to catch a pokemon first and then make make something that the pokemon would like (By the way they can release them afterwards if they like, and the catch a minimal of 3 pokemon's). You can ask them what the other pokemon favorite food like, but since only your pokemon can understand there language. Your respective pokemon is the one to ask questions about the food they like, and they would be asking the others pokemon. (Example: Mallow with bounsweet, asking the team's new catch, an eevee .Bounsweet and the other classmates pokemon will ask questions and then they will do there best to tell their trainer what it likes. They will be cooking, and then present it to eevee. If eevee like's it, then the team past the lesson. And cuz the other classmates may don't know how to cook, they will be there own things. Mallow will be in charge of cooking, kiawe will be the one searching for pokemon with Lana and Sophocles and lilie will research what food that will go well with food mallow cook, but they will also be helping mallow. After that the eevee's like the food and then they will be release. But one of them want to stay with lana, since she caught it. Eevee said goodbye to the pther eevee's.

- The point of this cooking lesson: To make new friends, make more communication with there pokemon. And test their teamwork with one another.
And since that is a long lesson, I suggest to seperate it in to two chapters. The first one will be catching the pokemon's. The next one will be the cooking. And this is just their first respective lesson.

I Repeat, you don't have to write these if don't like it. It's just a suggestion.

So thus is how she gets snowy. Also, please update the ash's just reward story. Thanks!

I saw the prize coming, but not the winner!
Go Lilly!
I did wish the prize was a ribbon or a small figure to remember her win that she could carry with her.
I also wished each of them were given their own eggs to hatch & raise.
For a homework project in Ash's class.
I mean he's hatched & raised just over 5 eggs already.

Over all Well Done & Great Work!
I hope to read more soon!

I got it they should capture more. Hey one of the lessons should involve them getting a low leveled Pokemon to raise and train.