You write so so well. Thank you.

I just love it. Its great to read the story for another pov. Thanks for sharing, i like it a lot.

Another awesome story!

Siiiiii. Este es el Elliot, hermano que siempre pensé que era, sensible, amoroso, empático, protector y un amigo. No es que fuera su responsabilidad total, pero se entiende que se sienta culpable, aunque no debería.

Good story

Since it has the copied lyrics of Brandi Carlile's "Carried Me With You", it breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:

Actions not allowed:
3. Copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain.

Please remove all of the copied lyrics from your story before someone can use them as evidence in their abuse reports.

And in case you're wondering when and why that rule is made, here is the background information. Back on April 27, 2005, the admins put this message on the front page regarding songfics:

In addition, [this site] would like to address a growing problem. For whatever reason, some writers feel it's okay to copy-n-paste musical lyrics they have not written into their fiction. If you did not write it, do not post it. This has always been our policy. Please remove these entries immediately to avoid account closure.

Keep in mind that "public domain" means something that has expired intellectual properties, like Shakespearean works. And disclaimers don't cut it for song lyrics. Not even changing a few words from the original song will be enough.

Beautiful chapter of the Greys' love for Christian since he came to live with them. Elliot took his father's advice on loving and caring for his younger to heart, and never stopped. Now, hearing about Elena's abuse, Elliot is going to even then the score.

Brilliant! Loved the perspective and well written! Wish you would continue, but if not thank you for this.

I really loved this. Your stories are wonderful, please keep writing!

Omg

I really liked the story, but it needs at least one more chapter.

I really like this.

This is a beautiful story about brotherly love! Please continue.