Wow a single chapter for the longest running story you had as a rewrite. I'm honestly frustrated you have good ideas and are a decent writer but I'm not getting my hopes up for this to see chapter 10

yeaa, a better and more elaboratr start for a rebirth. keep going

Can't say that I read your original attempt at this but what I've read so far is interesting enough to leave me looking out for updates, especially during the current crisis and how it feels like so many writers have gone MIA as of late. I'm looking forward to more of this in the future.

Quite interesting in spades here.

Yo, your writing is awesome. Keep on writing(love the plot btw) and stay safe during this time!

Like where this is going. Hope you update soon.

Great first chapter. Looking forward to more.

Blast from the past.

I liked the original versions, recommended them heavily when I was able to, can't really do that any more.

But this is great.

Nice first chapter

this is pretty good, but personally I really liked the original,

It's not the first time I've seen this premise but it's definitely the best written. I think you could actually have a really good story and hope you'll keep at it

I'm excited for the next chapter. thanks for posting and I hope your doing well in these chaotic times.