I love there's nothing you need to change about it

I read a Tokyo Ghoul story where he accidentally ate his mom on instinct he got his powers powers from Kaneki who was sealed in his head or something

Yea, I’d like to see where this story would go because Tokyo Ghoul is one of my favorite anime’s lol. Not to be rude, but you seem like a good author so I wonder if you could check out my book