Good good, again the flow of time seems off. He has clones and what not to learn but... seems too fast for dumb ole naruto to have caught on so fast. Kinda feel like he’s that scientist from boruto who gave him the jutsu device.

Great idea and I wished more people would use it seals. I do feel like the relationships changed too fast. Could of slowed things down and slowly changed it. Seems au for sure now

I just want to say THIS was beautiful and thank you for making it i didn't know i needed this till i read it.

intense action

I only read the first few chapters, and the idea is good. Buy if I may provide some constructive criticism, I think you should write more details. It feels weird how Naruto's thought process jumps from Haku dying, to training, to instantly asking for training after waking up without even seeing where he is, how his teammates are, or anything.

Great story! Can't wait for the next update!

Bummmer!