I just wanted to say that it is possible to learn all elements no matter what your dominant elemental nature is. The Third Hokage was known to master every single elemental ninjitsu known to Konoha. So it isn’t impossible to learn your opposite element, it would just take a lot of patience

Thanks for writing the story I enjoyed it so much

The way you describe the technique with the world falling away is so well written! Also lovin the shisui moments. These chapters are my rewards for studying.

Did something come out of telling Kakashi subtly that something is wrong?

Consider speeding up a little bit maybe? It's chapter 25 and she is still 6.

very nice!

yeah this is a really fuckin good story

good chapter, keep up the good work

It definitely feels like shes ricocheting all over the place mentally, almost like theres a big upcoming breakdown.

I liked the "your life is one of many we dont care about" it's funny in a morbid way and shows how quickly she unconsciously aligned with orochimaru

I can only state that this chapter is great, especially I like the character Orochimaru. Is hina following Orochimaru out of the village?

Hehhe sorry I can't write English correctly, because English is not my language

Definitely loving the dichotomy that's forming in her head, a proper dissociation of thoughts and motivations based on the circumstances.

Incredibly unhealthy: Yes
Will help prevent complete shutdown: Probably
Interesting to read: Yes

Keep up the great work!

thanks or the chapter

I’m crazy tired rn so I’ll write another review when I can think straight but this chapter was great. I love how you’ve discreetly shaped Hina’s relationship with her family, it never seemed to be the main focus but it all led up to what it is.

nicee