Kuro seems very interesting both kind and wise beyond his current age
Makes me wonder what his family's power is and how will he develop his abilities as he grows

If you do add other characters from other anime and manga series I hope you tweak them so that they can fit better into this story but still stay true to the originals
Also are you accepting OC submissions?

Keep up the good work

Espero que o Gasper esteja no grupo do abbadon como Bispo

Pena que a Koneko não está junto da Kuroka.

Belo capítulo

Espero que ele consiga resgatar o Kiba e introduzir ele como cavaleiro no seu grupo Abbadon

Nice start. I hope you won't leave it to rot in the next chapter. You have jaded MC. Use it, instead of 'healing' him in the next chapter, thus abandoning everything we now about him (as of chapter1).
I already voted, but I'll say it here as well. Don't add characters from other anime. It honestly just sounds lazy, and it's confusing for those who didn't watch the other anime. Use existing characters or create them, please. If you care, I'd suggest against introducing characters with made-up sacred gears. TBH, I'd suggest against 'using' any characters that have sacred gears, because I find them to be a cheap way to give power to an otherwise useless character but you do you.
What else? Don't throw him into Kuoh? I mean if you have some interesting plot that he could take part in there then sure, but making him follow the canon would be just boring. Focus on the MC first. Who attacked him, why, how did his family died exactly, does he still have enemies he has to worry about, did those enemies have allies that can give him trouble. That's something that can make the MC unique.
Also, please let him use his full name? I just like the sound of it. Besides, 'Kuro' could be the pet name for Kuroka

why don't you have siegfried for his knight and georg for his bishop

wow you are doing a great job of writing both your storys have started out great i am really interested in this one very ori. and i hope to read more soon thanks

Dumb question, but where are your polls.

Please no characters from other series. I am getting sick and tired of all these fics where authors just throw stuff from every anime together like poorly made mashed potatoes.

I would really appreciate it if you keep it as simple as possible.

I would much prefer OC characters, you can take inspiration from other anime but don't just copy paste please. You'll make the story far more complicated then it needs to be.

Another great Chapter keep it up!

I got to agree tertater65 esdeath would be a badass queen, katase and maruyama as the knights

Seems pretty interesting I'll keep on reading

you could put akame ga kill esdeath as queen has ice magic and also uses a sword can be a very good queen

altho there was one where I see a shortage of a quotation mark. the writint isn't half bad

interesting story hope this continues